1. IDENTS
Clockwork Lemon
Ticking clock-sound + maybe squishing in at a certain point
Cosmic Heat productions
audio levels are too high, trim and quicken
speed also Cosmic Heat Productions
AMBIENT SOUND
Train station, sound of trains moving, plus add traffic sound
Unclear where bedroom, art studio is
Wipe transition for still shots
Cut down as soon as second foot's down
Keep reaching for record in now, but if ur still down on time don't
Split clip. and speed up when it vinyl stops in air, speed that slit clip up,
Layering record layer, bring down the opacity of the other shot on the
vinyl, layer as soon as the vinyl fills the screen
Sequencing, cross cuts clothes falling down with Rachel
Layer and split screen
gets more exposition, narrative information, so the audience can follow
the preferred reading
Cut to secondary beat
2. Layer or cut between Rachel
Split takes up to fit with fast space
Cut in the track much faster, earlier than
Splitscreen Idea:
Overlap, block each other
Much bigger layer, start with small ones and then
Look at existing examples, look at film openings that are cut to the
music.
Guitar line slows it down, stop split screen then
Bring in Hugh a (guitar riff Hugh's foot goes out)
Track audio up and down, if one of the girls mentions the guy, more
diegetic sound
Guitar is stereotypically seen as a masculine feature (boybands)
Editing to reflect
audio levels are too high at some point
Green Screen Rachel Splitscreen , lots of Rachels onscreen
Impactive over-the top transition to get away from Evie
When Multiple Rachels disappear, Hannah leaves the house
3. Look at Heathers opening, voiceover
RC5 -'56, finishes on 1'05 is the first guitar riff, 1'40 we get it again
gap between MS of secretaries
Cut from secretaries ore to Ms Thomas
Cut after Bien sure, or get him onto the stairs (music fits in with jump
cuts)
Cut out sound of second hey, clapping hands with
third Will and Kate shot, just keep that
Maybe leave the pool stuff out.
Balls breaking, cutaway shot
Trim down Will and Evie going through door
Don't cut from Hannah on floor to
Cut out shot from behind of Will and Evie before door
Full crossword, you crop out from it, and zoom out.
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