1. Shot/Script Breakdown Sheet
Retribution:
Detective – Tunde
Mass Killer – Michael
Tobi Jones –Tunde
News Reporter – Soliyana
Victim 1
Victim 2
Victim 3
Victim 4
Extras

2. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 Green Screen Gangster Designed by
music starts director (me)
2 Establishing GM Fade (quick) Estate in
shot of block of continues Balham
flats/ estate
3 Low angle of GM Fade (quick) Stairs in the
tobi walking continues block
down stairs
4 Behind close GM music cut In block
up, waiting for (horror
lift sounds start)

3. Shot Sound Editing Setting
5 Shot of the Ding (HS cut In the block
button of lift continue)
being GM fades
out
6 Medium Shot Horror Slides into
in the lift as it sounds/ ‘Firework Films’
closes thunder logo then slides
out
7 Mid shot of Horror/ knife Fade to black In the lift
Tobi getting sounds
murdered
8 Black News Cuts to another
Reporter shot
speaks (VO)

4. Shot Sound Editing Setting
9 High Angle Silence Slow Fade In the Lift
shot of Tobi
dead in lift
10 Mid/CU shot of silence fade pub
David grieving
11 Mid/side shot Diegetic Cut In a room
of police Sound
interview
12 High Angle of Diegetic Cuts to black In a room
girl responding Sound)

5. Shot Sound Editing Setting
13 Black Phones Fade
Ringing
14 CU of David Diegetic cut Outside in
(Detective) on Sound – front of gates
phone to killer Horror fast
pace music
starts
15 LS of David Music gets Cut In a car Park
Jones running louder
to his car
16 David dragging Horror music Cut On estate
boy up on wall

6. Shot Sound Editing Setting
17 K1 Mid shot/ Horror cut toilets
Behind of girl SE(scream)/
in mirror music low
18 LS Chase Scene Music cont. cut On blocks
19 Chilling Scene Music cont. Cut Outside
20 K2 – Telephone Horror SE Cut On estate
Death – (bang)music
Pan/MS low

7. Shot Sound Editing Setting
21 Chase Scene – Horror music cut estate
Low Shots cont (fast)
22 Side MCU of Diegetic cut In a room
monster on top Sound –
of someone Horror fast
pace music
starts
23 K3 Music gets Cut In a car Park
louder
24 Someone Horror music Cut Street in
jumping to the Clapham
ground

8. Shot Sound Editing Setting
25 CU of girl with Slow Horror cut Dark room
tape round her SE, music
mouth slows/fades
26 K4 – door Music low, cut In house
slams MS and horror SE
moves back –
stab from back
27 Low Angle with Horror music Cut In a forest
Detective with low
gun
28 Pan Shot / MS Horror Cut Forest
of them SE(gunshot)
confronting music low

9. Shot Sound Editing Setting
29 Title Sequence Silence fades
30 CU of footsteps Footsteps fade toilet
SE/ horror
sounds
31 Low Shot of Silence Fade Toilet
Shoes in toilet
32 Murder and Bang (loud) Cut toilet
Face in scene