Screenplay
Packageexchange. Round booth table. Some tagline? Lamp in middle.
Knocking on door walking in, pan round the bar and then sit down for the deal.
Gangster discussion and then hands over the suitcase.
Start on black, then we hear knocking and the slot opens, pan back to see
someone in suit or flapper. Door opens and they walk in. Pan around bar see
some stuff and then follows character to table. Sit down at table opposite
some gangsters. So the gangsters talk and then the packageis exchanged. Then
the main character speaks high pitch (maybeScottish). (joke)
Possibly startin the Barr and drab atmosphereuntil Irn-Bru man comes in. Get
Xtra out of life. Hands over Irn-Bru to the bar, transition from black and white
to colourful seen, in come the flappers or maybepeople in modern day
clothes.
Location: Bar looking location (Hawk hills)(café)(Tesco)(Community centre)
Costumes: Suits, Kilt, Dresses.
Props: candle, (red)table cloth, briefcase, slider, glasses, Irn-Bru, money.
Knock knock knock, slider opens and we see a mans bloodshoteyes, welinger
on his eyes for a couple of seconds and the slot then closes and wepan back
behind the main protagonist. The door slowly open and the camera swoops in
to the speakeasy, wepan around at the bar, where we see the barman
cleaning a glass looking at the now open door with no expression on his face.
We then pan further round to the stage with a man with a kilt on. There is air
being blown up the kilt and we are blown back to the protagonist. Wethen
proceed into the speak easy following the protagonist. The protagonist
approaches the table and sits down we place the camera in place of the
protagonist. At the table sits a number of gangsters and flappers, ever since we
lost the Brew doing hits justhasn’t felt right. We then hear a load knock at the
door, we see the door fly off its hinges. We hear load bagpipes and out of the
smokearrives a Scotsman. Switch back to see shocked faces, we then cut to a
suitcaseflying through the air, then wesee it land on the table and open in
frontof the gangsters. Wesee the Kilt man in the background of the shot
slowly come into focus were he flashes an Irn-Bru. TheIrn-Bru flies toward the
screen, and we see the end screen shotwith our tagline. they ask if he has the
stuff (changethis). The protagonisthands over the suitcaseand the gangsters
open it up, the slyly smile and hand over cash. The guy then speaks in a high
pitch voice and wont stop talking, the gangsters look around and nod to each
other dink someIrn-Bru. Voiceover says Irn-Bru gets you through.
We start looking at a dull brown drink, wepan out to see a barman servea
downtrodden looking man.
Screenplaying

Screenplaying

  • 1.
    Screenplay Packageexchange. Round boothtable. Some tagline? Lamp in middle. Knocking on door walking in, pan round the bar and then sit down for the deal. Gangster discussion and then hands over the suitcase. Start on black, then we hear knocking and the slot opens, pan back to see someone in suit or flapper. Door opens and they walk in. Pan around bar see some stuff and then follows character to table. Sit down at table opposite some gangsters. So the gangsters talk and then the packageis exchanged. Then the main character speaks high pitch (maybeScottish). (joke) Possibly startin the Barr and drab atmosphereuntil Irn-Bru man comes in. Get Xtra out of life. Hands over Irn-Bru to the bar, transition from black and white to colourful seen, in come the flappers or maybepeople in modern day clothes. Location: Bar looking location (Hawk hills)(café)(Tesco)(Community centre) Costumes: Suits, Kilt, Dresses. Props: candle, (red)table cloth, briefcase, slider, glasses, Irn-Bru, money. Knock knock knock, slider opens and we see a mans bloodshoteyes, welinger on his eyes for a couple of seconds and the slot then closes and wepan back behind the main protagonist. The door slowly open and the camera swoops in to the speakeasy, wepan around at the bar, where we see the barman cleaning a glass looking at the now open door with no expression on his face. We then pan further round to the stage with a man with a kilt on. There is air being blown up the kilt and we are blown back to the protagonist. Wethen proceed into the speak easy following the protagonist. The protagonist approaches the table and sits down we place the camera in place of the
  • 2.
    protagonist. At thetable sits a number of gangsters and flappers, ever since we lost the Brew doing hits justhasn’t felt right. We then hear a load knock at the door, we see the door fly off its hinges. We hear load bagpipes and out of the smokearrives a Scotsman. Switch back to see shocked faces, we then cut to a suitcaseflying through the air, then wesee it land on the table and open in frontof the gangsters. Wesee the Kilt man in the background of the shot slowly come into focus were he flashes an Irn-Bru. TheIrn-Bru flies toward the screen, and we see the end screen shotwith our tagline. they ask if he has the stuff (changethis). The protagonisthands over the suitcaseand the gangsters open it up, the slyly smile and hand over cash. The guy then speaks in a high pitch voice and wont stop talking, the gangsters look around and nod to each other dink someIrn-Bru. Voiceover says Irn-Bru gets you through. We start looking at a dull brown drink, wepan out to see a barman servea downtrodden looking man.