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THE END 
Author: Lucas Monteiro Guedes 
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura 
Illustrator: nidihi 
Publisher: www.storybird.com 
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014 
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário” 
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia
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  • 7. THE END Author: Lucas Monteiro Guedes Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura Illustrator: nidihi Publisher: www.storybird.com Date: II Semester - Summer 2014 A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário” CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia
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