An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.

2. As soon as I wake
up, I notice those
little eyes follow me
me as I rush with my
daily tasks. It’ clear
in those eyes when I
put food, the water
and only then I start
my personal duties,
always followed by
her watchful little
eyes. Sometimes I
wonder if I am being
evaluated by my
little princess.

3. She is my joy, I do
not see myself
without her
company. Although
she likes to chew
some sandals and
torn pads, we get
along very well. I’m
pretty sure she
understands my
feelings. The money
spent every month in
improving her
appearance, vaccine
and food is worth
every cent, because
it all comes back in
return in the form of
affection and love
she also has for me.

4. There is a saying
that you know who is
really your friend
when you put both
tied to a trunk for
three hours and
when let them go,
the one who is happy
to see the other is
free is really your
friend.
The largest
demonstration of
friendship should
come from human
beings, but that is
not what happens.
Aninmals tend to
love
unconditionally.

5. THE END
Author: Laura Oliveira
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: ClaudioCerri
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

6. Page line Where it says... It should have said...
How would you grade this story from 10 to 100? - Grade: ( ) Why?
What did you think about this story? Did you like it? Why?
SUGESTIONS TO IMPROVE THE STORY...