The document summarizes feedback received from test audiences on a teaser trailer. The feedback was generally positive but provided constructive criticism. Based on this, certain shots were removed that didn't clearly convey narrative or symbolism. Titles were also added to follow genre conventions. The revised trailer without the removed shots is easier to understand and improved.

2. In order to assure that our teaser trailer is
suitable for our target audience we asked
for feedback from a group of our target
audience members. The feedback that we
received from our target audience on
our rough cut was generally positive, with
groups commenting that they liked
many aspects of our teaser trailer so far,
such as our shot variety, voice over and
our mix of piano music for the soundtrack.

3. However, we did receive some
constructive criticism from the other
groups, including:
 Putting in more titles to fit in more with
the general conventions of teaser trailers
 Some of the shots towards the end of the
film were not clear enough in their
narrative, and therefore did not make
sense to an audience.
 The film teaser perhaps being too long.

4. As a result of this feedback, we have taken out all of the shots that
were filmed outside, as these were the ones that didn't make sense to
the audience. The shots filmed outside were meant to symbolise the
main character coming free from her anxiety, as when she is suffering
she remained inside, trapped, and when she is not suffering she is
running free outside. However we realise that while we have this idea in
our heads, the audience probably would not see the same symbolism
as we did, so we decided to therefore remove the shots. Another shot
that we took out was a shot of one of my family member on the phone
supposedly talking to someone about Eve's condition, saying she was
worried. We were also advised to take this out as she had the only
speaking part in the trailer, making the shot look incongruous to the rest
of the trailer.

5. Our trailer now is easier to understand, and
we agree that it does look a lot better now
having taken out those shots. Taking out
the shots at the end also helped us to work
with another criticism that we had, which
was that our teaser trailer was too long,
which it now isn't, thanks to removing the
shots.

6. Another piece of feedback in which we
received was adding titles to our teaser.
Originally, we were using the handwriting
of the diary as a somewhat title, however
after doing some research upon various
teasers within our genre, we found that
having a title followed the conventions.
Therefore, we decided to add in titles.
Examples, of real media teaser trailers
within our genre include…