The document provides step-by-step instructions for duplicating a DVD using three different tools. It clearly explains each step, such as where to click and what will appear on screen. While the writing is clear and references additional resources, the summary could be improved with screenshots to better illustrate the process.

1. Peer Review Exercise # 2
Kazuhiro Matsumoto

2. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document?
The primary idea is how to Duplicate DVD
2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
I think so because it introduces three different tools and explain how to use them one by one, step by step.
3. What details are included in the document?
It is consist of what to do with tools such as where to click, what will be on the screen.
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
Everything is clear to me.
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
It explains step by step and it also have links to resources so that user do not need to search on search
engine.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
I could not find any error.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
If it had a picture or screen shot, it should be easier to understand.
8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this
author authored it (as you see it in the link).
1:We might introduce only one tool to copy DVD. I think it is not good because some programs do not work
on some computer or OS.
2:We might have images to explain.
3:We might not have any reference or resources.