diary

1. My Poster Feed Back

2. Tools iv used in to make my poster
I've used the crop tool in
my poster mainly for
editing my poster, what I
specifically used it from
was to minimize the
images of myself for the
product.
Furthermore, id used the polygon tool
to go around the edges of some of the
thing's I'd done for my editing however,
I personally think it would have been
better if I used it for multiple things for
my poster.
I had mainly used the eraser
Tool for my product because I
found it simpler to use
however, I should use more
than the Eraser next time due
to how the product looks which
is more pixelated than smooth

3. What people liked about the poster

4. The improvements that can be made
The improvements that people have given me has helped me a lot on what I need to improve upon
and I'll be showing how iv responded to the improvements

5. What people didn’t like about my poster
What I can also
improve on is the
stuff people don’t
like to make it
either better or
remove it as a
whole to see if it
looks any better

6. Improvements / alterations to poster

7. For this image specifically I used photoshop, to make it the way it looks with no background including in my
hair and with how it looks smooth compared to the others is that, I went into Layer then went onto select
background and then went to clear background then selected it to then get rid of all the space that wasn’t
needed
However, for the other two images I have they had gone corrupt on my One Drive so I couldn’t use them but
improvised to them use an app on my phone called Pixart which I used to try and smoothen the edges of the
image of myself, although it still looks slight pixilated it is a lot better than the previous quality it was in.
For this image I came into some problems that I had eraced some things that
would make need to reset so instaed I used the sample tool to
get a simular colour and just fill it in which helpped alot

8. In Pixart I used the Opacity tool to make my final product of the poster
different, I personally think it looked cool and gives a cool transition to
what consistency can do and to show the befits and how healthy and
happy you can be once achieved.
Furthermore, for my poster the Opacity I used, 50% so you can still see
me but faded and so I could also fit all three versions in without it looking
terrible
I had to use the Erase tool a lot for the product due to my files
being corrupt, to make it look good instead of staying zoomed out
to edit I had zoomed all the way to make it look less pixilated and
more smooth. However, compared to what photoshop can do it
isn't the best but I'm happy with the way it turned out and ended
up looking better than my last product.

9. iv taken all the improvements into consideration, I have made the
poster more of an original and type of poster, basically
demonstrating a transformation over time.
I had made sure to make the text clearer and more visible as well
as the barcode, because it was blurry. Furthermore, I've used a
different text font to make it less blurry and easier to read and not
have the text look strange and I've done my own improvements,
instead of cramming it full of words I've decided to only have a
quote and the information
Although it isn't a whole lot, I've changed the colour of the poster,
I've taken the fade blue to white away because it looks messy, and
I believe that having the pain white with blue at the bottom
followed with the three images is good
I was not fortunate to make the images clearer for the poster, but I
did attempt at also making them less pixelated, in the first picture
it's got the least amount of pixelated features due to me using
photoshop but my files had gotten corrupt for the other two, so I
had to use an app called Pixart to make them looks better than
previously
Iv done both what people have suggested to
be improved and what they disliekd and iv
done some of my own personal
improvements that I thought should be made

10. Radio Advert Feed Back

14. From my audience feedback, I've decided that I
needed to add calm sounding music, so it isn't
coming across as assertive but just making it known
that NHS provide this.
I have also tried a clearer voice so it's more clear to
hear
I've also made sure there isn't any background audio
involved in this so its juts my voice and the music that
is heard
Furthermore, iv also edited it to make sure the
sounds of me rustling and moving isnt heard in the
audio file
Radio Advert Inprovements

15. For this there was a few bumps in my work with things not going my way however, I think I best improvised with what I
could do. Through my files being corrupt for my edits for the final, not having a mic to make my voice clear for my audio
advert, not being able / attempt to use photoshop for my final, tools not working but I have overcome them due to using
different apps that can help in the long run and maybe into the future, I had used a lot of free apps to try and edit my
photos but Pixart was the best possible choice to be able to edit efficiently for me. Furthermore, the audio, I didn’t have a
camera with an extension with a mic with me, so I had to use my phone that doesn’t have the best mic however, it wasn’t
bad but next time I'll be sure to use a microphone or a camera with one as an extension to see a difference
More so my one drive also didn’t work on my phone or pc to be able to send images to each other so one way I managed
to overcome that, was to use different apps on my phone that I use socially and post them in a chat on my phone, (which
would be Instagram, WhatsApp, Facebook, Messager and snapchat) then on my pc id be able to download them which
helped me in a few situations so I could still produce work and not do it again on a separate device
Self-Improvements