1. The good points of the video ‘’Locked Up’’ is that they acted upon a film, the films are not specified but
everything that they are doing in the prison they are doing it in our own playground for example they play
basketball, go to the gym. ‘’the lips did not sync in with the period of the tune’’
The goods of that video is that they are the shots meaning it had different type shots for example they have the
close up when he was singing the Corus.
The improvements is that everyone in the back when they were sitting on the stairs started to laugh so they could
on worked on that a bit and pretended not to laugh.
The way it filled the genre of the music video is that Brian tried to look wedge, the gestures. Jarhead pulled a
smile but the rest of the people where running up and down the stairs.
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2. The good points is that they filmed the most expensive shops there could be so for example there was the Ferrari
shop etc. They took these shots because one day they were going to become rich and also there face expressions
were amazing.
The improvements they sang the wrong parts, Oli was singing Laurent's parts so they can change that. Another
point that I think that they could improve on is that whiles Laurent is singing you could see Oli in the background
they could of changed it because your seeing two people moving there lips and not knowing which on is which.

3. The good points of this piece of work is that they where using the camera properly what I mean about that is that
they are tracking the guy singing along the fence so I thought that was a good one.
The improvements that they have to do is that through half of the song he wasn’t even moving his lips so they
could reflects on that and probably change it, and the other half of the song he didn’t know the song and the
worst bit is that they were moving but the audience couldn’t even see him.

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The improvements are that they could of done is that the beginning they could of change the colour from white
to something normal, in the bathroom they could of not be looking at the camera but she was just staring at it so
she could change that.

5. The good points is that Khalid knew all of the lines to the song. The angles of the camera was good and he done a
good job.
The improvements are that they shouldn’t of done that stupid light all the time they could of done it once and
that’s it but they done it all through the music video so they could change that or next time improve it. Another
thing that they could improve on is that Navid didn’t know even one line of the song so next time he could
practise the song so when he is going to sing it at least he could know the lines.