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PITCH FEEDBACK
WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS ON
MY PITCH?
From the responses, it is all
good feedback. However I
now know from the audience
feedback that I shouldn’t
have too much text in the
pitch, but my ideas are clear.
“It is a good
pitch”
“A bit text
heavy”
“I like the
ideas”
“It’s
clear”
WHAT WOULD YOU CHANGE
ABOUT THE PITCH?
From my feedback, most of the
audience have said they would
change nothing, however one person
would like to know how my film will
stand out. Another thing was to make
it more visual and highlight key
points and make it clearer how it
appeals to the audience. I will now
make it more clearer and make the
key points in my pitch stand out.
DO YOU LIKE THE CHARACTERS?
0
0.5
1
1.5
2
2.5
3
3.5
4
4.5
Yes No
Series 1
Series 1
4/5 people have said from the
feedback that they like the
characters, however one
person said they did not. This
shows me maybe I should edit
a character or two.
DO YOU THINK BLUMHOUSE IS THE
RIGHT INSTITUTION FOR THIS?
WHY?From my research, everybody has said that
Blumhouse is the right institution for my film.
This is because they produce the same sort of
films and the plot goes well with the institution.
Also because of the same target audience, it
would go well. Blumhouse
Yes No
DO YOU THINK THE FILM WILL BE
SUCCESSFUL?
Everyone who answered my survey
has said that the film would be
successful.
Successful
Yes No

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Pitch feedback

  • 2. WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS ON MY PITCH? From the responses, it is all good feedback. However I now know from the audience feedback that I shouldn’t have too much text in the pitch, but my ideas are clear. “It is a good pitch” “A bit text heavy” “I like the ideas” “It’s clear”
  • 3. WHAT WOULD YOU CHANGE ABOUT THE PITCH? From my feedback, most of the audience have said they would change nothing, however one person would like to know how my film will stand out. Another thing was to make it more visual and highlight key points and make it clearer how it appeals to the audience. I will now make it more clearer and make the key points in my pitch stand out.
  • 4. DO YOU LIKE THE CHARACTERS? 0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5 3 3.5 4 4.5 Yes No Series 1 Series 1 4/5 people have said from the feedback that they like the characters, however one person said they did not. This shows me maybe I should edit a character or two.
  • 5. DO YOU THINK BLUMHOUSE IS THE RIGHT INSTITUTION FOR THIS? WHY?From my research, everybody has said that Blumhouse is the right institution for my film. This is because they produce the same sort of films and the plot goes well with the institution. Also because of the same target audience, it would go well. Blumhouse Yes No
  • 6. DO YOU THINK THE FILM WILL BE SUCCESSFUL? Everyone who answered my survey has said that the film would be successful. Successful Yes No