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Pitch feedback
Corey
The BBC found our idea interesting and
thought people outside of Sunderland would
be interested. However they reminded my
team that a audience for Sunderland would
know this so we had to change it to include
less facts about Lewis Carrel.
The BBC stated they liked visuals but were
concerned it was to much work for us to
complete given the time of the brie. The team
and I then spoke about this, then suggested we
just use Sunderland and film areas that have
been affected by Lewis Carrels work.
They suggested to look at what areas show
Lewis Carrels perspective and his work, as this
would be different to others and how we can
show this in our project.
feedback

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  • 2. The BBC found our idea interesting and thought people outside of Sunderland would be interested. However they reminded my team that a audience for Sunderland would know this so we had to change it to include less facts about Lewis Carrel. The BBC stated they liked visuals but were concerned it was to much work for us to complete given the time of the brie. The team and I then spoke about this, then suggested we just use Sunderland and film areas that have been affected by Lewis Carrels work. They suggested to look at what areas show Lewis Carrels perspective and his work, as this would be different to others and how we can show this in our project. feedback