Actually I'm still in Gr.6, but I wanted to share this opinion essay I wrote with you, and I would be very happy to have your comments about it, positive or negative..

1. Motherhood
Mother, is a human that every person needs to manage
life. Without mother, you will not even know what life
means. In my opinion, I think she is the most: loving,
caring, and helping. She did all her best to help her kids.
Mother isn’t a normal person, in my opinion she’s the
most important and needed between all the humanity
kinds. She loves; she likes to give what she can for her
kids. Because of her love, everybody survived happily.” A
child would always suffer without a mother”. That what
mother’s love means. Without her love, without her hugs
kids cannot know the meaning of the life.
Her caring is the most important; she cares for her kid
more than anyone does. If the child fell down, she holds
him up and courage him for more and more. She could
never say no, even if she lost her life. She cares for the
health of her kid; even if he sneezed she hurries to bring
a tissue for him! She could never let her kid cry, or
complain of anything.
She also help her kid whenever he needs, like helping
him for his homework. Also, she helps him during any
mission. She is really helping person. Most important she
helps her kid at reading and exams. Mother is a helper!
She always encourages her kid for more success. When
her kid grows up, she never stops helping because she is
really a good and nice person.

2. At the end we summarize that the mother is a good,
nice and helping person. We cannot live without mother
and her love, caring, and helping! We just need her
everywhere.
Done By: Sara Bashar Sabsabi
School: IJPS – International Jubilee Private School
Day of publish: 19/ November /2012 Monday