TUTORIAL
   For the following sentences, tell what is misplaced
    and then correct each sentence by rewriting it. 
    Submit your corrected sentences in the assignment
    space below:
   1. While sweeping the floor, the stew boiled over on
    the stove.
   2. To write correctly, proper English should be used.
   3. After putting a new ribbon in the printer, my
    papers looked better.
   4. While washing his brother’s car, a scratch was
    discovered on the bumper.
   5. Thinking of something else, the instructor's voice
    surprised me.
   After turning on the radio, the baby woke up

   Modifier: “After turning on the radio”
   What does is modify? Did the baby turn on the
    radio? No!!!
   To correct it, give the modifier something to
    modify!
   The baby woke up after her brother turned on the
    radio.
   Carlos found another fuse in the drawer that
    was no good.

   Was the fuse no good? Or the drawer?
   How to fix it – place the modifier – “that was no
    good” – closer to the word it modifies:
   Carlos found another fuse that was not good in
    the drawer.
   While sweeping the floor, the stew boiled over
    on the stove.

   Modifier – “while sweeping the floor”
   Who swept the floor? Insert the word it
    modifies.
   While ____ was sweeping the floor, the stew
    boiled over on the stove.
   After putting a new ribbon in the printer, my
    papers looked better.

   What is the modifier? Underline it.

   Did the papers put in a new ribbon?

Give the modifier something to modify!

Misplaced Modifiers

  • 1.
  • 2.
    For the following sentences, tell what is misplaced and then correct each sentence by rewriting it.  Submit your corrected sentences in the assignment space below:  1. While sweeping the floor, the stew boiled over on the stove.  2. To write correctly, proper English should be used.  3. After putting a new ribbon in the printer, my papers looked better.  4. While washing his brother’s car, a scratch was discovered on the bumper.  5. Thinking of something else, the instructor's voice surprised me.
  • 3.
    After turning on the radio, the baby woke up  Modifier: “After turning on the radio”  What does is modify? Did the baby turn on the radio? No!!!  To correct it, give the modifier something to modify!  The baby woke up after her brother turned on the radio.
  • 4.
    Carlos found another fuse in the drawer that was no good.  Was the fuse no good? Or the drawer?  How to fix it – place the modifier – “that was no good” – closer to the word it modifies:  Carlos found another fuse that was not good in the drawer.
  • 5.
    While sweeping the floor, the stew boiled over on the stove.  Modifier – “while sweeping the floor”  Who swept the floor? Insert the word it modifies.  While ____ was sweeping the floor, the stew boiled over on the stove.
  • 6.
    After putting a new ribbon in the printer, my papers looked better.  What is the modifier? Underline it.  Did the papers put in a new ribbon? Give the modifier something to modify!