Jennifer Principe
                                                                                COM 410
                                                                              Prof. Hobbs
                                                                          October 11, 2012
                            Assignment #4: Proposal
TITLE: The Tollman Trio


CONCEPT: A best friend girl trio, with interests in science, animals and band, trying to

get through normal high school challenges and celebrations.


CONTENT: There are three main girl characters: Madison, a red haired and energetic

girl who thinks Biology and Geometry are absolutely fascinating; Courtney, a Korean girl

who loves animals and has a passion for community service; and Erica, a Black girl who

plays snare drum and enjoys friendly competition in the musical field. The three girls

have grown up together, and even though they have varying interests, they find lessons

they can learn from one another. They all attend Tollman High School, in the town of

Tollman, Massachusetts, a suburb of Boston.


      In addition to science and math, Madison enjoys singing pop songs, but she is too

shy to ever sing in front of an audience. Courtney struggles with being a bit overweight,

and she often puts herself down about not being ‘pretty enough’. Erica loves competing,

especially in music, but sometimes her ego can get the best of her.


Episode Ideas:


       Madison is teased by boys in her classes for being a girl and having interests in

       the science and math fields. She has to stand up to them and prove that girls can

       excel in the STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) field,

       just as well as boys do.
Madison wants to audition for the annual spring musical but she is too shy to

       audition, nevertheless sing in a production on stage. She learns to get over her

       stage fright, finds the courage to sing and allows herself to be criticized by others.

       Courtney enjoys community service and she plays a huge part in the school’s

       Habitat for Humanity chapter. However, she has a hard time finding others who

       care about service, because they’re just involved to fulfill community service

       hours.

       Courtney is a bit overweight and she does not consider herself pretty or

       attractive. When she goes shopping for a dress for the Homecoming Dance, she

       struggles to be happy with the way she looks.

       Erica is an assertive female on the school’s drum line, but she doesn’t get respect

       from her male peers. She wants to be treated equally but when she lands a solo

       in the show, they just give her grief about it.

       Erica lives for band and drum line and more than anything, she loves winning

       first place in the competitions against other high schools. When the band falls

       apart and they land in last place at a competition, she is upset and has to learn

       that marching band is all about being a team, in good times and bad.


GENRE & FORMAT: The show would be an animated television show airing in half hour

segments on Nickelodeon or similar children’s network. Each show will feature a

different story line and teach a new lesson. The episodes are each their own separate

story, however, they will follow a normal school year in order. The episodes will focus

around: high school events (school musical, SATs, preparation for college, dances,

homecoming, football games, pep rallies, etc.), acceptance of being different from the
norm, encouragement for girls to do what they love, female empowerment. The

episodes will be more focused on humor than drama. The show will also contain a small

musical element to it. The show will have small parts of Madison singing by herself and

in the school musical. There will also be segments of band and drum line, featuring

Erica and the Tollman Band.


AUDIENCE and DISTRIBUTION: Aimed towards girls, ages 11-15, various

demographics. The show features girls who may have interests that are not as popular,

but it normalizes those interests, no matter what gender or ethnicity. It may also appeal

to the mothers of these girls because of the good nature of the show’s lessons.


COMPETITIVE ANALYSIS: Other television shows that feature high school aged girls,

such as: As Told by Ginger (animated), Wizards of Waverly Place (live action).


APPEAL: It features girls who are normal and enjoy hobbies that are not as popular as

others. They are relatable characters in real life situations.


DISTRIBUTION: The show can be viewed both on television when it airs, or on the

internet, on the network’s website.


MARKETING/PROMOTION/LICENSING/MERCHANDISING: The network that has

the show can run commercials leading up to the premier. The show can be advertised in

magazines for teen girls (YM, Teen Vogue, Seventeen) and magazines for mothers

(Better Homes, Vogue, People). We would contact Amy Jussel, founder of Shaping

Youth, who would probably support the show on her website. We would also get in

touch with the organization Miss Representation, because they would enjoy seeing a

show with strong, realistic female characters. Finally, we would contact Spark a
Movement, who also would be a fan of the characters on the show. All three of the

groups/ people just mentioned would hopefully be able to promote the show and want

to invest in it because of the values and lessons within it.

Media Proposal- The Tollman Trio

  • 1.
    Jennifer Principe COM 410 Prof. Hobbs October 11, 2012 Assignment #4: Proposal TITLE: The Tollman Trio CONCEPT: A best friend girl trio, with interests in science, animals and band, trying to get through normal high school challenges and celebrations. CONTENT: There are three main girl characters: Madison, a red haired and energetic girl who thinks Biology and Geometry are absolutely fascinating; Courtney, a Korean girl who loves animals and has a passion for community service; and Erica, a Black girl who plays snare drum and enjoys friendly competition in the musical field. The three girls have grown up together, and even though they have varying interests, they find lessons they can learn from one another. They all attend Tollman High School, in the town of Tollman, Massachusetts, a suburb of Boston. In addition to science and math, Madison enjoys singing pop songs, but she is too shy to ever sing in front of an audience. Courtney struggles with being a bit overweight, and she often puts herself down about not being ‘pretty enough’. Erica loves competing, especially in music, but sometimes her ego can get the best of her. Episode Ideas: Madison is teased by boys in her classes for being a girl and having interests in the science and math fields. She has to stand up to them and prove that girls can excel in the STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) field, just as well as boys do.
  • 2.
    Madison wants toaudition for the annual spring musical but she is too shy to audition, nevertheless sing in a production on stage. She learns to get over her stage fright, finds the courage to sing and allows herself to be criticized by others. Courtney enjoys community service and she plays a huge part in the school’s Habitat for Humanity chapter. However, she has a hard time finding others who care about service, because they’re just involved to fulfill community service hours. Courtney is a bit overweight and she does not consider herself pretty or attractive. When she goes shopping for a dress for the Homecoming Dance, she struggles to be happy with the way she looks. Erica is an assertive female on the school’s drum line, but she doesn’t get respect from her male peers. She wants to be treated equally but when she lands a solo in the show, they just give her grief about it. Erica lives for band and drum line and more than anything, she loves winning first place in the competitions against other high schools. When the band falls apart and they land in last place at a competition, she is upset and has to learn that marching band is all about being a team, in good times and bad. GENRE & FORMAT: The show would be an animated television show airing in half hour segments on Nickelodeon or similar children’s network. Each show will feature a different story line and teach a new lesson. The episodes are each their own separate story, however, they will follow a normal school year in order. The episodes will focus around: high school events (school musical, SATs, preparation for college, dances, homecoming, football games, pep rallies, etc.), acceptance of being different from the
  • 3.
    norm, encouragement forgirls to do what they love, female empowerment. The episodes will be more focused on humor than drama. The show will also contain a small musical element to it. The show will have small parts of Madison singing by herself and in the school musical. There will also be segments of band and drum line, featuring Erica and the Tollman Band. AUDIENCE and DISTRIBUTION: Aimed towards girls, ages 11-15, various demographics. The show features girls who may have interests that are not as popular, but it normalizes those interests, no matter what gender or ethnicity. It may also appeal to the mothers of these girls because of the good nature of the show’s lessons. COMPETITIVE ANALYSIS: Other television shows that feature high school aged girls, such as: As Told by Ginger (animated), Wizards of Waverly Place (live action). APPEAL: It features girls who are normal and enjoy hobbies that are not as popular as others. They are relatable characters in real life situations. DISTRIBUTION: The show can be viewed both on television when it airs, or on the internet, on the network’s website. MARKETING/PROMOTION/LICENSING/MERCHANDISING: The network that has the show can run commercials leading up to the premier. The show can be advertised in magazines for teen girls (YM, Teen Vogue, Seventeen) and magazines for mothers (Better Homes, Vogue, People). We would contact Amy Jussel, founder of Shaping Youth, who would probably support the show on her website. We would also get in touch with the organization Miss Representation, because they would enjoy seeing a show with strong, realistic female characters. Finally, we would contact Spark a
  • 4.
    Movement, who alsowould be a fan of the characters on the show. All three of the groups/ people just mentioned would hopefully be able to promote the show and want to invest in it because of the values and lessons within it.