The document provides an update on editing a wedding scene video. It compares the final pitch idea, Ms. Gregory's feedback, and the final product. The summary is: The dialogue was removed, short sharp shots like a montage were used instead of a 30 second scene, and 'Bleach Bypass' and 'Old World' effects were added to make it look like a home movie montage.

1. EDITING UPDATE
Shona Traynor
Xavier Vale

2. Final Pitch Idea Ms. Gregory’s Idea Final Product
WEDDING SCENE NEEDED SOME REFINING
Dialogue – Full Speech - Actors/Acting - No dialogue, have the
- Despite ‘looking’ the soundtrack playing
part, acting is a bit off over the top.
-
Longevity – 30sec - Going WAY too - NO
long, need to sharpen up dialogue, short, sharp
editing. shots like a montage
- But then would then affect
the dialogue
Effects – None - With the dialogue and - ’Bleach Bypass’ and
editing changing, this ‘Old World’ Effects
would have to change to. added on
- Makes it look like a
home movie montage

3. The following are
screenshots of the
colour correction
process

4. Original
This is the original
piece of footage from
last weekend’s filming.