Here are a few suggestions to improve your health care proposal:
- Provide more details on the specific plan options (e.g. what services are covered under each tier, deductible and out-of-pocket maximum amounts). This will help readers understand the proposal better.
- Explain how the plan will be funded and administered. For example, will it be a single-payer system run by the government? Or will private insurers still play a role? Addressing these implementation details is important.
- Discuss how the proposal aims to control overall health care costs in the long run. For example, will it focus on preventative care and chronic disease management to reduce expensive emergency visits?
- Acknow