How to Write Emails that Sell
Remind yourself why!
emails are important for you
Where my sales strategy comes from
•  Selling local & long-distance telecommunications
services for MLM program
•  Selling $25M+ companies to investors and other
larger companies at investment bank
•  Selling 3 different products in three different
industries at three different failed startups
•  Selling legal software to massive companies that get
sued a lot
Write Emails that Sell!
6 Specific Strategies to Write Effective Sales Emails
Know your email objective
•  You want to schedule something
–  a call, a demo, in person, conference call

•  You want to gather information
–  fill out survey, status of deal, meeting participants

•  You want to drive traffic to website
–  product announcement, recent news, signups, users
Make your email address personal
•  Use your real name
–  personal = Ian Adams, ian@senatorclub.co
–  generic = Sales, sales@senatorclub.co

•  Consider perception of email format
–  small/startup = ian@senatorclub.co
–  big/enterprise = ian.adams@senatorclub.co
Your subject line should tell not sell
telling	
  

selling	
  

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Subject line samples for you
Best	
  Open	
  Rates	
  (60%-­‐87%)	
  

1. [COMPANYNAME] Sales & Marketing Newsletter
2. Eye on the [COMPANYNAME] Update (Oct 31 - Nov 4)
3. [COMPANYNAME] Staff Shirts & Photos

Worst	
  Open	
  Rates	
  (1%-­‐14%)	
  

1. Last Minute Gift - We Have The Answer
2. Halloween - Shop Early & Save 10%
3. Give a Gift Certificate this Holiday

Source:	
  h*p://mailchimp.com/resources/research/email-­‐marke5ng-­‐subject-­‐line-­‐comparison/#sec5on_observa5ons	
  	
  
Focus on the recipient in the email
•  Who is this?
•  How do I know you?
•  What do you want from me?
•  How do I benefit?
•  …then what do I need to do?
Always write a call to action at the end
•  Ask a question
–  Can we find a good time to chat next week?
–  Is there a better number to reach you on?
–  What are the other participants names and emails?

•  Suggest an action
–  Let me know the best date and time that works for you.
–  Get your copy of the whitepaper by clicking here.
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Keep your signature simple
In order of importance, include:
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Your name
Your title (in some cases, do not use)
Your phone number
Your email address
Your website
Your social media profile
Bad sales email example
Good sales email example
Conclusion to write emails that sell
•  Know your objective
•  Make your email address personal
•  Write subject lines that tell, not sell
•  Focus on the recipient in the email
•  Always write a call to action at the end
•  Keep your signature simple
Now go out and write emails that SELL!

How to write emails that sell

  • 1.
    How to WriteEmails that Sell
  • 2.
    Remind yourself why! emailsare important for you
  • 3.
    Where my salesstrategy comes from •  Selling local & long-distance telecommunications services for MLM program •  Selling $25M+ companies to investors and other larger companies at investment bank •  Selling 3 different products in three different industries at three different failed startups •  Selling legal software to massive companies that get sued a lot
  • 4.
    Write Emails thatSell! 6 Specific Strategies to Write Effective Sales Emails
  • 5.
    Know your emailobjective •  You want to schedule something –  a call, a demo, in person, conference call •  You want to gather information –  fill out survey, status of deal, meeting participants •  You want to drive traffic to website –  product announcement, recent news, signups, users
  • 6.
    Make your emailaddress personal •  Use your real name –  personal = Ian Adams, ian@senatorclub.co –  generic = Sales, sales@senatorclub.co •  Consider perception of email format –  small/startup = ian@senatorclub.co –  big/enterprise = ian.adams@senatorclub.co
  • 7.
    Your subject lineshould tell not sell telling   selling   vs.   •  eDiscovery and predictive coding •  Most Accurate Predictive Coding •  Allstate discovery tools •  Climb Out of Your Email Landfill •  Call with Jill Hamilton •  Reduce your review costs by 80% •  Is predictive coding right for you? •  Free eDiscovery Advice
  • 8.
    Subject line samplesfor you Best  Open  Rates  (60%-­‐87%)   1. [COMPANYNAME] Sales & Marketing Newsletter 2. Eye on the [COMPANYNAME] Update (Oct 31 - Nov 4) 3. [COMPANYNAME] Staff Shirts & Photos Worst  Open  Rates  (1%-­‐14%)   1. Last Minute Gift - We Have The Answer 2. Halloween - Shop Early & Save 10% 3. Give a Gift Certificate this Holiday Source:  h*p://mailchimp.com/resources/research/email-­‐marke5ng-­‐subject-­‐line-­‐comparison/#sec5on_observa5ons    
  • 9.
    Focus on therecipient in the email •  Who is this? •  How do I know you? •  What do you want from me? •  How do I benefit? •  …then what do I need to do?
  • 10.
    Always write acall to action at the end •  Ask a question –  Can we find a good time to chat next week? –  Is there a better number to reach you on? –  What are the other participants names and emails? •  Suggest an action –  Let me know the best date and time that works for you. –  Get your copy of the whitepaper by clicking here. –  [continue reading here…]
  • 11.
    Keep your signaturesimple In order of importance, include: •  •  •  •  •  •  Your name Your title (in some cases, do not use) Your phone number Your email address Your website Your social media profile
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    Conclusion to writeemails that sell •  Know your objective •  Make your email address personal •  Write subject lines that tell, not sell •  Focus on the recipient in the email •  Always write a call to action at the end •  Keep your signature simple Now go out and write emails that SELL!