To impress readers with your essay, begin with a creative introduction that draws them in. Reference an analogy, personal story, or unique perspective to attract attention. Additionally, add emotion through discussing hopes or personal experiences. Utilize consistent sentence structures and incorporate quotes, sayings, or references to enhance the narrative. Employ varied vocabulary while avoiding complex words that could be misused. The overall goal is to engage readers from the start through creative writing and emotional connection.

1. How to impress everyone with your
essay
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2. Be creative
The intro will make or break your essay. The key is to attract the reader's attention away from the TV
and fully onto your essay. In the intro, be creative. Use an analogy, tell a personal experience story,
whatever you do, start out with a something different!
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3. Addemotion
Any kind of emotion in the intro or conclusion (more likely in the conclusion) will get the reader to
start thinking. Talk about how your pet dog has been your personal hero in your life trials. Or fall back
on the ol' reliable--hope. Talk about the hope to one day create a more peaceful world. Talk about the
hope to one day reach that elusive goal. Remember, there is always hope. If you talk about
something briefly at the very beginning of your intro, refer back to it quickly in your conclusion. It'll
remind your reader you know how to write an essay and you know what you're doing.
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4. Utilize sentence structures to your advantage
Start off sentences with the same start to add more emotion. Example: "Sometimes the world gets
too out of hand. Sometimes the world just needs a better hero. Sometimes, I can be that hero.“
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5. Whenin doubt, use movie quotes, songs, famous people
(i.e.US presidents, class presidents, etc.), or well-knownsayings
Either you can outright quote them, such as "If we don't come together right now, on this hallowed
ground, we too will be destroyed" (Remember the Titans). Or you can change it up slightly to show
off your creativity, such as "The grass actually ISN'T greener on the other side.“
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6. Use at least somewhat decent vocabulary
By using too many simple words, the reader may not notice it at first, but he will notice your lack of
strong vocabulary. Insert a few good words here and there, and if you're slightly in doubt on what a
complicated word means, just don't use it. Misusing a word can rip your essay into pieces in the
reader's mind.
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