Remarkable WritingBy Mrs. GarroLos Medanos Elementary
Do you want to be a remarkable writer?(narration)  Just remember it doesn’t happen overnight.  You don’t wake up a fantastic writer.  It takes work and a little research, but the following journey your teacher has prepared for you will help.  Are you ready?Get ready to take off on a writing webquest!
Let’s start simple and look at what makes up a sentence.A sentence  has aSUBJECT, that is theWho  of the sentence. The alien.
Don’t you think something is missing?That’s because every sentence also has a predicate, the action!What did the alien do?Thealienmet a human.
So now we know what makes a simple sentence. Can we make it better?  Yes we can!Here’s where your search begins!First, you are going to visit at least 3 following websites to boost your vocabulary and both listen to and read some remarkable writing!http://www.storylineonline.net/rotten/fullscreen_xl.htmlHomophone matching game http://www.bbc.co.uk/skillswise/words/spelling/recognising/homophones/game.shtmlHomograph Jeopardy (one or two player)http://www.quia.com/cb/96929.htmlHomograph factsheethttp://www.bbc.co.uk/skillswise/words/spelling/recognising/homophones/factsheet1.shtmlGo to the next slide if you are brave enough to accept your first mission.
Mission #1Learn how adjectives can add detail to a simple sentence.http://www.lexington1.net/technology/instruct/ppts/LAppts/k2/funwithadj.pptNeed a little more help?  Check out this video from School House Rock!
Let’s see what we found outAdjectives  help add detailMean and greenRemember our alien?  Pretend there was no illustration, what might he look like?Friendly and caringThe friendlyalien met a caring human. =a much better 						sentence!
Mission #2Write down all the words you hear or read that “paint a picture in your mind”.  They can be words that help you see, hear, touch, feel, or taste what the writer is trying to describe.http://www.storylineonline.net/rainbowfish/fullscreen_xl.html
Okay, it’s quiz time!What is the subject of the following sentence?The humans thought the spaceship was an airplane.	THOUGHT	HUMANS
Think you can handle more?What is the predicateof the following sentence?The Earth spins on its axis.	spins on its axis.	The Earth
Last chance to show what you know!How many adjectives can you find in this super sentence?The slimy aliens crashed into a dark cave near the small town.      2		       3		     4SLIMY		DARK		SMALLCLICK!
Let’s review how to Paint a Picture in the reader’s mind.Remember My Rotten Red Headed Older Brother?Patricia Polacco didn’t just say, “The girl had a  brother”.She said, “He had orange hair that was like wire;  he was covered in freckles, and looked like a weasel with glasses.”
Are you ready for the next mission?Mission #3If you think you need to listen to the story again first, click below and pay attention to the adjectives!http://www.storylineonline.net/rotten/fullscreen_xl.htmlNow go to the following Scholastic site and type in My Rotten Red Headed Older Brother for Title and Richie for Character, follow the steps, and print out.http://teacher.scholastic.com/activities/scrapbook/
Your Final Mission!Choose someone in your family to describe.  Yes, it can even be your dog or cat.Things to remember:First, draw a picture of this person/animalUse a circle map to write down everything you can think of about that person or animal using your drawing
How tall or small?Hair color?What do they do with you?Name of Family MemberWhat do they look like?What do they like to wear?What do they like to do?What do they sound like?
Remarkable writing

Remarkable writing

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    Remarkable WritingBy Mrs.GarroLos Medanos Elementary
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    Do you wantto be a remarkable writer?(narration) Just remember it doesn’t happen overnight. You don’t wake up a fantastic writer. It takes work and a little research, but the following journey your teacher has prepared for you will help. Are you ready?Get ready to take off on a writing webquest!
  • 3.
    Let’s start simpleand look at what makes up a sentence.A sentence has aSUBJECT, that is theWho of the sentence. The alien.
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    Don’t you thinksomething is missing?That’s because every sentence also has a predicate, the action!What did the alien do?Thealienmet a human.
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    So now weknow what makes a simple sentence. Can we make it better? Yes we can!Here’s where your search begins!First, you are going to visit at least 3 following websites to boost your vocabulary and both listen to and read some remarkable writing!http://www.storylineonline.net/rotten/fullscreen_xl.htmlHomophone matching game http://www.bbc.co.uk/skillswise/words/spelling/recognising/homophones/game.shtmlHomograph Jeopardy (one or two player)http://www.quia.com/cb/96929.htmlHomograph factsheethttp://www.bbc.co.uk/skillswise/words/spelling/recognising/homophones/factsheet1.shtmlGo to the next slide if you are brave enough to accept your first mission.
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    Mission #1Learn howadjectives can add detail to a simple sentence.http://www.lexington1.net/technology/instruct/ppts/LAppts/k2/funwithadj.pptNeed a little more help? Check out this video from School House Rock!
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    Let’s see whatwe found outAdjectives help add detailMean and greenRemember our alien? Pretend there was no illustration, what might he look like?Friendly and caringThe friendlyalien met a caring human. =a much better sentence!
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    Mission #2Write downall the words you hear or read that “paint a picture in your mind”. They can be words that help you see, hear, touch, feel, or taste what the writer is trying to describe.http://www.storylineonline.net/rainbowfish/fullscreen_xl.html
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    Okay, it’s quiztime!What is the subject of the following sentence?The humans thought the spaceship was an airplane. THOUGHT HUMANS
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    Think you canhandle more?What is the predicateof the following sentence?The Earth spins on its axis. spins on its axis. The Earth
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    Last chance toshow what you know!How many adjectives can you find in this super sentence?The slimy aliens crashed into a dark cave near the small town. 2 3 4SLIMY DARK SMALLCLICK!
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    Let’s review howto Paint a Picture in the reader’s mind.Remember My Rotten Red Headed Older Brother?Patricia Polacco didn’t just say, “The girl had a brother”.She said, “He had orange hair that was like wire; he was covered in freckles, and looked like a weasel with glasses.”
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    Are you readyfor the next mission?Mission #3If you think you need to listen to the story again first, click below and pay attention to the adjectives!http://www.storylineonline.net/rotten/fullscreen_xl.htmlNow go to the following Scholastic site and type in My Rotten Red Headed Older Brother for Title and Richie for Character, follow the steps, and print out.http://teacher.scholastic.com/activities/scrapbook/
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    Your Final Mission!Choosesomeone in your family to describe. Yes, it can even be your dog or cat.Things to remember:First, draw a picture of this person/animalUse a circle map to write down everything you can think of about that person or animal using your drawing
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    How tall orsmall?Hair color?What do they do with you?Name of Family MemberWhat do they look like?What do they like to wear?What do they like to do?What do they sound like?