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SECONDHAND SERENADE – ‘FIX YOU’

By

Samantha Jewiss & Louise Heathorn
FADE IN

EXT. ESTABLISHING SHOT of a train station, panning around
setting. Cut to ESTABLISHING SHOT of street, cut to LONG
SHOT of a living room and then cut to EXTREME LONG SHOT
of a room. Camera tracks along a wall of photographs in
the room, where there is a man sitting with his back to
the camera.

                                                    CUT TO
INT. KIRSTY’S BEDROOM – DAY

KIRSTY is sitting on her bed in her room. Camera starts
off behind to the left of KIRSTY, but then pans around
her to show her face. MID SHOT of KIRSTY shows her as
upset and heartbroken.

SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
When you try your best, but you don’t succeed

                                                    CUT TO
INT. GARETH’S ROOM – DAY

CLOSE UP of GARETH standing at his window smoking. Shows
his facial expression as stressed and frustrated.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
    When you get what you want, but not what you need

GARETH leans against the wall next to the window, and
slumps to the floor. He sits with his knees up, rubbing
eyes in frustration. Camera zooms out from MID SHOT to
LONG SHOT.

                   SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
          When you feel so tired, but you can’t sleep

                                                    CUT TO
INT. KIRSTY’s BATHROOM – DAY

KIRSTY leans over the sink looking at her reflection in a
side on MID SHOT. She is overwhelmed with emotions.

                  SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                       Stuck in reverse

Camera pans to an OVER THE SHOULDER shot, zoom in to a
CLOSE UP. KIRSTY looks at herself, trying to compose
herself and fix her make up.
SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
       And the tears come streaming down your face

                                                  CUT TO
INT. KIRSTY’S BEDROOM – MORNING
FLASHBACK of the couple. CLOSE UP of GARETH and KIRSTY
recording themselves in a handheld video recording style.
Camera cut to GARETH and KIRSTY in LONG SHOT of them
filming.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
        When you lose something you can’t replace

                                                    CUT TO
INT. KIRSTY’s HALLWAY – DAY

KIRSTY walks out of bathroom into hallway where GARETH is
standing in the doorway. Camera pull and throw shot,
focus first on KIRSTY from side view and shows her
looking up at GARETH.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
       When you lose someone, but it goes to waste

Camera then focuses on GARETH in the background looking
at KIRSTY. He is upset and apologetic.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                   Could it be worse?

                                                    CUT TO
EXT. FIELD – EVENING

FLASHBACK of EXTREME LONG SHOT of KIRSTY and GARETH
letting off Chinese lanterns in a field. Arc 180’ around
the couple setting off the lanterns.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Lights will guide you home
                  And ignite your bones
                And I will try to fix you

                                                    CUT TO
EXT. STREET – DAY

FLASHBACK of the couple. LONG SHOT of them walking down
the street, enjoying each other’s company and holding
hands.


                                                    CUT TO
INT. KIRSTY’S HALLWAY – DAY

KIRSTY and GARETH begin   to talk however this escalates
into a heated argument.   KIRSTY begins to raise her voice
and become angry as she   walks towards GARETH, who is
still standing near the   front door.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                    And high up above

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                      Or down below

                                                    CUT TO
EXT. STREET - DAY

FLASHBACK of the couple. LONG SHOT of the couple walking
together talking and laughing. MID CLOSE UP of their
faces, looking at each other with their expressions full
of love and emotion.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
          When you’re too in love to let it go

                                                    CUT TO
EXT. OUTSIDE KIRSTY’s HOUSE - DAY

GARETH and KIRSTY walk out of KIRSTY’s house and walk
down the street in LONG SHOT. They are walking with a
significant distance between them, showing how they are
not as close as they once were. They are both walking
slowly and hesitantly. GARETH looks at the floor with his
hands in his pockets as he walks whereas KIRSTY looks
around her and off into the distance, arms folded. They
talk as they walk.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
       But if you never try then you’ll never know

GARETH stops, reaches out touches KIRSTY’s arm in MID
CLOSE UP. KIRSTY stops and looks up at him with a hurt
and sad expression, then looks off into the distance and
begins to walk again.
SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                 Just what you’re worth

EXT. GARETH’s HOUSE - DAY

The couple have walked to GARETH’s house. GARETH opens
his front door and holds it open for KIRSTY to enter
before him.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Lights will guide you home

Match on action showing GARETH shutting the door from the
inside, dumping his bag on the floor. KIRSTY looks around
her uncomfortably, as if she remembers all the memories
they once had here and then looks at GARETH.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                  And ignite your bones

                                                  CUT TO
INT. GARETH’s HOUSE - EVENING

FLASHBACK of GARETH and KIRSTY sitting on the sofa
watching a film. KIRSTY has fallen asleep on GARETH’s
shoulder. GARETH checks if KIRSTY is awake and when he
realises she is asleep smiles to himself.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                  I will try to fix you

                                                  CUT TO
INT/EXT. VARIOUS LOCATIONS - DAY

CLOSE UP of the couple at KIRSTY’S house messing around.
Cut to couple walking down the street. Cut to couple at
GARETH’s house arguing. Cut to handheld footage of the
couple at the park. Cut to couple at KIRSTY’s house
arguing. Cut to KIRSTY storming out and slamming the
front door of GARETH’s house and GARETH shouting after
her. Cut to couple laughing and joking with each other.
Cut to handheld footage of couple happy. Cut to GARETH
frustrated with KIRSTY in her room. Cut to KIRSTY looking
at a photograph of her and GARETH. Cut to close ups of
the couple happy. Cut to heated arguments and fights.


               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                     [Instrumental]

                                                  CUT TO
INT. KIRSTY’s HOUSE - DAY

GARETH and KIRSTY are fighting in KIRSTY’s living room.
KIRSTY is shouting and crying at GARETH who is in turn
shouting back at her. They are both angry and frustrated
with the situation and each other, standing close to one
another and expressing their emotions.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Tears stream down your face

KIRSTY shouts at GARETH to leave, but quickly pushes him
out and slams the front door.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
        When you lose something you can’t replace

KIRSTY turns around and leans against the front door,
crying and closing her eyes with her head leant back.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Tears stream down your face

GARETH is standing on the other side of the door, leaning
against it and speaking through it to KIRSTY. He is
trying to apologise to her and is desperate for another
chance.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                        And I...

                                                    CUT TO
INT. KIRSTY’s BEDROOM - DAY

KIRSTY storms into her bedroom and rummages through her
drawers. She angrily swipes away tears and gathers all of
GARETH’s clothes out of drawers, opens her window and
chucks them out.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Tears stream down your face
       When you lose something you cannot replace

                                                    CUT TO

INT. GARETH’s HOUSE - EVENING

FLASHBACK of KIRSTY and GARETH who are fighting and
getting annoyed with each other. OVERLAY shot of KIRSTY
AND GARETH sitting on a bench together, laughing.
SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Tears stream down your face
                         And I...

INT. GARETH’s ROOM – DAY

KIRSTY rips the photographs of the couple off the wall in
frustration, throwing them on the floor.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Tears stream down your face

GARETH steps over to her and holds her.GARETH gently
pushes her against the wall, leaning over her and trying
to talk her, calming her down. GARETH lifts KIRSTY’s chin
to look at him in MID SHOT.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
       I promise you I will learn from my mistakes

KIRSTY is upset and turns her head away, avoiding eye
contact.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O)
               Tears stream down your face

MID CLOSE UP of the couple standing close, with GARETH
looking at KIRSTY and KIRSTY looking away. Both are upset
and hurt yet a lot calmer after their argument.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                         And I…

                                                  CUT TO
EXT. TREE – EVENING

FLASHBACK of the couple with KIRSTY leaning into GARETH
talking and sitting under a tree. There are fairy lights
hanging in the tree around them, and they are sitting on
a blanket. MID CLOSE UP of the couple.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
               Lights will guide you home

                                                  CUT TO
EXT. TREE (PRESENT) – DAY

After the couple have their small argument at GARETH’s
house, they go back to the tree location. MID LONG SHOT
of the couple walking together in the field, they stop in
front of the tree. Camera pull and throw of the couple in
the foreground then focuses on the tree in the
background.

                SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O)
                  And ignite your bones

Cut to CLOSE UP of the couple looking at each other with
the tree in the background.

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                     And I will try

                                                   CUT TO
INT. GARETH’s ROOM – DAY

Camera tracks out of photograph on the wall of the couple
in the tree location in the evening (FLASHBACK).

               SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.)
                       To fix you




                                                 FADE OUT

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Fix you script

  • 1. SECONDHAND SERENADE – ‘FIX YOU’ By Samantha Jewiss & Louise Heathorn
  • 2. FADE IN EXT. ESTABLISHING SHOT of a train station, panning around setting. Cut to ESTABLISHING SHOT of street, cut to LONG SHOT of a living room and then cut to EXTREME LONG SHOT of a room. Camera tracks along a wall of photographs in the room, where there is a man sitting with his back to the camera. CUT TO INT. KIRSTY’S BEDROOM – DAY KIRSTY is sitting on her bed in her room. Camera starts off behind to the left of KIRSTY, but then pans around her to show her face. MID SHOT of KIRSTY shows her as upset and heartbroken. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) When you try your best, but you don’t succeed CUT TO INT. GARETH’S ROOM – DAY CLOSE UP of GARETH standing at his window smoking. Shows his facial expression as stressed and frustrated. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) When you get what you want, but not what you need GARETH leans against the wall next to the window, and slumps to the floor. He sits with his knees up, rubbing eyes in frustration. Camera zooms out from MID SHOT to LONG SHOT. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) When you feel so tired, but you can’t sleep CUT TO INT. KIRSTY’s BATHROOM – DAY KIRSTY leans over the sink looking at her reflection in a side on MID SHOT. She is overwhelmed with emotions. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Stuck in reverse Camera pans to an OVER THE SHOULDER shot, zoom in to a CLOSE UP. KIRSTY looks at herself, trying to compose herself and fix her make up.
  • 3. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) And the tears come streaming down your face CUT TO INT. KIRSTY’S BEDROOM – MORNING FLASHBACK of the couple. CLOSE UP of GARETH and KIRSTY recording themselves in a handheld video recording style. Camera cut to GARETH and KIRSTY in LONG SHOT of them filming. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) When you lose something you can’t replace CUT TO INT. KIRSTY’s HALLWAY – DAY KIRSTY walks out of bathroom into hallway where GARETH is standing in the doorway. Camera pull and throw shot, focus first on KIRSTY from side view and shows her looking up at GARETH. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) When you lose someone, but it goes to waste Camera then focuses on GARETH in the background looking at KIRSTY. He is upset and apologetic. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Could it be worse? CUT TO EXT. FIELD – EVENING FLASHBACK of EXTREME LONG SHOT of KIRSTY and GARETH letting off Chinese lanterns in a field. Arc 180’ around the couple setting off the lanterns. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Lights will guide you home And ignite your bones And I will try to fix you CUT TO
  • 4. EXT. STREET – DAY FLASHBACK of the couple. LONG SHOT of them walking down the street, enjoying each other’s company and holding hands. CUT TO INT. KIRSTY’S HALLWAY – DAY KIRSTY and GARETH begin to talk however this escalates into a heated argument. KIRSTY begins to raise her voice and become angry as she walks towards GARETH, who is still standing near the front door. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) And high up above SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Or down below CUT TO EXT. STREET - DAY FLASHBACK of the couple. LONG SHOT of the couple walking together talking and laughing. MID CLOSE UP of their faces, looking at each other with their expressions full of love and emotion. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) When you’re too in love to let it go CUT TO EXT. OUTSIDE KIRSTY’s HOUSE - DAY GARETH and KIRSTY walk out of KIRSTY’s house and walk down the street in LONG SHOT. They are walking with a significant distance between them, showing how they are not as close as they once were. They are both walking slowly and hesitantly. GARETH looks at the floor with his hands in his pockets as he walks whereas KIRSTY looks around her and off into the distance, arms folded. They talk as they walk. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) But if you never try then you’ll never know GARETH stops, reaches out touches KIRSTY’s arm in MID CLOSE UP. KIRSTY stops and looks up at him with a hurt and sad expression, then looks off into the distance and begins to walk again.
  • 5. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Just what you’re worth EXT. GARETH’s HOUSE - DAY The couple have walked to GARETH’s house. GARETH opens his front door and holds it open for KIRSTY to enter before him. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Lights will guide you home Match on action showing GARETH shutting the door from the inside, dumping his bag on the floor. KIRSTY looks around her uncomfortably, as if she remembers all the memories they once had here and then looks at GARETH. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) And ignite your bones CUT TO INT. GARETH’s HOUSE - EVENING FLASHBACK of GARETH and KIRSTY sitting on the sofa watching a film. KIRSTY has fallen asleep on GARETH’s shoulder. GARETH checks if KIRSTY is awake and when he realises she is asleep smiles to himself. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) I will try to fix you CUT TO INT/EXT. VARIOUS LOCATIONS - DAY CLOSE UP of the couple at KIRSTY’S house messing around. Cut to couple walking down the street. Cut to couple at GARETH’s house arguing. Cut to handheld footage of the couple at the park. Cut to couple at KIRSTY’s house arguing. Cut to KIRSTY storming out and slamming the front door of GARETH’s house and GARETH shouting after her. Cut to couple laughing and joking with each other. Cut to handheld footage of couple happy. Cut to GARETH frustrated with KIRSTY in her room. Cut to KIRSTY looking at a photograph of her and GARETH. Cut to close ups of the couple happy. Cut to heated arguments and fights. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) [Instrumental] CUT TO
  • 6. INT. KIRSTY’s HOUSE - DAY GARETH and KIRSTY are fighting in KIRSTY’s living room. KIRSTY is shouting and crying at GARETH who is in turn shouting back at her. They are both angry and frustrated with the situation and each other, standing close to one another and expressing their emotions. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Tears stream down your face KIRSTY shouts at GARETH to leave, but quickly pushes him out and slams the front door. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) When you lose something you can’t replace KIRSTY turns around and leans against the front door, crying and closing her eyes with her head leant back. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Tears stream down your face GARETH is standing on the other side of the door, leaning against it and speaking through it to KIRSTY. He is trying to apologise to her and is desperate for another chance. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) And I... CUT TO INT. KIRSTY’s BEDROOM - DAY KIRSTY storms into her bedroom and rummages through her drawers. She angrily swipes away tears and gathers all of GARETH’s clothes out of drawers, opens her window and chucks them out. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Tears stream down your face When you lose something you cannot replace CUT TO INT. GARETH’s HOUSE - EVENING FLASHBACK of KIRSTY and GARETH who are fighting and getting annoyed with each other. OVERLAY shot of KIRSTY AND GARETH sitting on a bench together, laughing.
  • 7. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Tears stream down your face And I... INT. GARETH’s ROOM – DAY KIRSTY rips the photographs of the couple off the wall in frustration, throwing them on the floor. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Tears stream down your face GARETH steps over to her and holds her.GARETH gently pushes her against the wall, leaning over her and trying to talk her, calming her down. GARETH lifts KIRSTY’s chin to look at him in MID SHOT. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) I promise you I will learn from my mistakes KIRSTY is upset and turns her head away, avoiding eye contact. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O) Tears stream down your face MID CLOSE UP of the couple standing close, with GARETH looking at KIRSTY and KIRSTY looking away. Both are upset and hurt yet a lot calmer after their argument. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) And I… CUT TO EXT. TREE – EVENING FLASHBACK of the couple with KIRSTY leaning into GARETH talking and sitting under a tree. There are fairy lights hanging in the tree around them, and they are sitting on a blanket. MID CLOSE UP of the couple. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) Lights will guide you home CUT TO EXT. TREE (PRESENT) – DAY After the couple have their small argument at GARETH’s house, they go back to the tree location. MID LONG SHOT of the couple walking together in the field, they stop in front of the tree. Camera pull and throw of the couple in
  • 8. the foreground then focuses on the tree in the background. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O) And ignite your bones Cut to CLOSE UP of the couple looking at each other with the tree in the background. SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) And I will try CUT TO INT. GARETH’s ROOM – DAY Camera tracks out of photograph on the wall of the couple in the tree location in the evening (FLASHBACK). SECONDHAND SERENADE (V.O.) To fix you FADE OUT