Evaluation Results Requirement: Survey of World History: UYT Task 4 AUTHOR: Kaitlin Galvan DATE EVALUATED: 02/18/2018 06:27:42 PM (MST) DRF TEMPLATE: Survey of World History (UG, C375, UYT1-0615) PROGRAM: Survey of World History (UG, C375, UYT1-0615) EVALUATION METHOD: Using Rubric FINAL SCORE Does not Meet General comments: 2/18/18 - This thoughtful essay capably discusses the causes of the American Revolution, aptly discussing several factors that led to the Revolution, such as the British imposition of taxes such as the Stamp Act, the Boston Massacre, and the Intolerable Acts. Nationalism is also competently explained as developing during the American Revolution, as an increasing number of Americans were native-born and identified themselves as a political community. Finally, a suitable explanation of the consequences of industrialization is present and ably discusses how those consequences included the development of the factory system, the development of new forms of transportation, such as steamships, and changes in women's position, both in the home and in society. A discussion of the results of the American Revolution could not be discerned in the submission. Detailed Results (Rubric used: UYT Task 4 (0615)) ARTICULATION OF RESPONSE (CLARITY, ORGANIZATION, MECHANICS) 0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT 1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT 2. 2=COMPETENT The candidate provides unsatisfactory articulation of response. The candidate provides weak articulation of response. The candidate provides adequate articulation of response. Printed on: 02/19/2018 12:31:36 PM (EST) https://lrps.wgu.edu/provision/27641407 https://www.taskstream.com/ CRITERION SCORE: 2.00 A. CAUSES AND RESULTS OF REVOLUTION 0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT 1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT 2. 2=COMPETENT The candidate does not provide a logical discussion of the causes and results of 1 of the given revolutions. The candidate provides a logical discussion, with insufficient detail, of the causes and results of 1 of the given revolutions. The candidate provides a logical discussion, with sufficient detail, of the causes and results of 1 of the given revolutions. CRITERION SCORE: 0.00 COMMENTS ON THIS CRITERION: 2/18/18 - The essay capably discusses the causes of the American Revolution, aptly noting how factors such as the British imposition of taxes, such as the Stamp Act, following the French and Indian War, the Boston Massacre, and the Intolerable Acts, were all important in leading to the conflict with Britain. A discussion of the results of the American Revolution could not be discerned in the submission. For instruction on the causes and results of the American Revolution, please revisit Unit 6: Modern Patterns in World History, Module 15: The Rise of Nationalism and Political Transformations in the Atlantic World in the study plan for this course by clicking on the link located in the top left in this rubric item's name, Causes and Results of Revo ...