The document outlines a timeline and storyboard for a draft film. It follows a girl who goes to the park and texts a friend but receives a busy response. She takes out her journal and has flashbacks to being bruised and strangled by her mother. She rushes from the park, takes the bus while checking the time, and runs home, stopping at the front door just before the 4:30 deadline her mother set. The storyboard section contains blank frames to map out the visuals.

1. Draft 4 Planning :
Timeline and Storyboard

2. Girl is walking
into the park.
She finds a tree
trunk , sits down
and takes out
her phone and
texts her friend.
ELLIPSIS.
Reads text from
friend that says,
‘I’m Busy’.
She puts her phone
away and takes out
her journal.
She opens her journal
and looks over her
previous entries.
FLASHBACK.
Girl checking her
bruises in the mirror.
END OF FLASHBACK.
FLASHBACK.
Mother strangling
her.
END OF FLASHBACK.
Turns the next
page of the journal.
Turns the next
page of the
journal.
FLASHBACK
Girl’s friend sees
her bruise and
quickly covers it
up.
END OF
FLASHBACK.
Timeline= Time change

3. Timeline
Puts away her
journal and
rushes out the
park.
Girl gets on the
bus. Keeps
checking the
time.
Running down
her street.
Stops running at
the front door.
Door.
Girl.
Door.
Checks the time. 4:20
Voice over of
mother telling
her to be home
by 4:30.
Door.
Girl.

4. Storyboard

5. Storyboard

6. Storyboard

7. Storyboard

8. Storyboard