This document provides guidance on writing a descriptive essay. It explains that a descriptive essay uses sensory details like sight, sound, touch, smell, and taste to describe an object, place, or experience. It emphasizes showing rather than telling details. The structure includes an introduction with a thesis, three body paragraphs describing the subject, surroundings, and sensory/emotional experience, and a conclusion. Tips are given for planning, drafting, and revising a descriptive essay to provide a vivid impression for readers.
NARRATIVE WRITING relates a clear sequence of events that occurs over time. Both what happens and the order in which the events occur are communicated to the reader. Effective narration requires a writer to give a clear sequence of events (fictional or non-fictional) and to provide elaboration.
NARRATIVE WRITING relates a clear sequence of events that occurs over time. Both what happens and the order in which the events occur are communicated to the reader. Effective narration requires a writer to give a clear sequence of events (fictional or non-fictional) and to provide elaboration.
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http://www.descriptiveessaywriting.com/ This presentation is about how to write a descriptive essay , what topics you need to use, shows examples of it.
Explaining how to create an effective Narrative Piece...
Included with animations and attractive photos...
perfect for Grade 6 and upwards...
Also includes Homework at the end of PPT...
Major Paper #1--The Point of View EssayPurpose This paper assi.docxdesteinbrook
Major Paper #1--The Point of View Essay
Purpose:
This paper assignment has several purposes. As the first major paper for this class, the Point of View Essay is designed to re-engage you with the fundamentals of all good writing, including using lush sensory details to show the reader a particular place (rather than tell them about it), basic organization, clear focus, etc. However, this unit does not function as a mere review. The Point of View Essay will also introduce you to the concept of "thinking and seeing rhetorically, and analyzing writing rhetorically"--using the Writer's Toolbox described in this unit to improve your writing and critical reading skills. Finally, the Point of View Essay allows you to reflect on this process.
The Assignment:
1. Pleasant/Unpleasant Description of the Place:
Choose a place you can observe for an extended period of time (at least 20-30 minutes). Use all of your senses (sight, hearing, touch, smell, even taste if possible) to experience the place, and record all of the sensations that you experience. As you record your data, you may wish to note which details naturally seem more positive, negative, or neutral, in terms of tone. (For instance, a stinky and overflowing trash barrel swarming with flies in a nearby alley might seem more inherently negative than a little white bunny rabbit hopping playfully across the lawn.) Then, you will use this information to help your write two descriptions of the place: one positive, one negative (at least 1-2 well-developed paragraphs or a minimum of 125-150 words each). Both descriptions should be factually true (same real time and real place), but you will want one description to be clearly positive in terms of tone and the other to be clearly negative. In addition to including the information and sensory details you've collected as the basis for these descriptions, you will also use the Writer's Toolbox to create your two contrasting impressions for this assignment. (The Writer's Toolbox is explained in the Lecture Notes section of this unit.) As you revise and refine your descriptions, please be sure you are "showing" your readers your place (really putting the readers "there" in the moment and in this scene), rather than simply "telling" them about it. You will also want to try to eliminate unnecessary linking verbs as much as you can, incorporating verbs that show "action" whenever possible.
2. Rhetorical Analysis:
Looking back at your descriptions, analyze how you created these two very different impressions of the place (one positive, one negative) without changing any of the facts. How did you make your place seem so positive in one paragraph and yet so negative in the other paragraph, without changing the facts? Discuss how you incorporated each of the tools from the Writer's Toolbox, and cite examples of this from each of your descriptions. (This analysis should be at least 400-500 words in length.)
3. Reflection:
In one to two paragrap.
Major Paper #1--The Point of View EssayWe will be working on this .docxcarliotwaycave
Major Paper #1--The Point of View Essay
We will be working on this paper for the next three units. The final draft of the paper--with all three sections described below--will be due at the end of Unit #4.
Purpose:
This paper assignment has several purposes. As the first major paper for this class, the Point of View Essay is designed to re-engage you with the fundamentals of all good writing, including using lush sensory details to show the reader a particular place (rather than tell them about it), basic organization, clear focus, etc. However, this unit does not function as a mere review. The Point of View Essay will also introduce you to the concept of "thinking and seeing rhetorically, and analyzing writing rhetorically"--using the Writer's Toolbox described in this unit to improve your writing and critical reading skills. Finally, the Point of View Essay allows you to reflect on this process.
The Assignment:
1. Pleasant/Unpleasant Description of the Place:
Choose a place you can observe for an extended period of time (at least 20-30 minutes). Use all of your senses (sight, hearing, touch, smell, even taste if possible) to experience the place, and record all of the sensations that you experience. As you record your data, you may wish to note which details naturally seem more positive, negative, or neutral, in terms of tone. (For instance, a stinky and overflowing trash barrel swarming with flies in a nearby alley might seem more inherently negative than a little white bunny rabbit hopping playfully across the lawn.) Then, you will use this information to help your write two descriptions of the place: one positive, one negative (at least 1-2 well-developed paragraphs or a minimum of 125-150 words each). Both descriptions should be factually true (same real time and real place), but you will want one description to be clearly positive in terms of tone and the other to be clearly negative. In addition to including the information and sensory details you've collected as the basis for these descriptions, you will also use the Writer's Toolbox to create your two contrasting impressions for this assignment. (The Writer's Toolbox is explained in the Lecture Notes section of this unit.) As you revise and refine your descriptions, please be sure you are "showing" your readers your place (really putting the readers "there" in the moment and in this scene), rather than simply "telling" them about it. You will also want to try to eliminate unnecessary linking verbs as much as you can, incorporating verbs that show "action" whenever possible.
2. Rhetorical Analysis:
Looking back at your descriptions, analyze how you created these two very different impressions of the place (one positive, one negative) without changing any of the facts. How did you make your place seem so positive in one paragraph and yet so negative in the other paragraph, without changing the facts? Discuss how you incorporated each of the tools from the Writer's T.
Point of View EssayMajor Paper #1--The Point of View Essay.docxblazelaj2
Point of View Essay
Major Paper #1--The Point of View Essay
We will be working on this paper for the next three units. The final draft of the paper--with all three sections described below--will be due at the end of Unit #4.
Purpose:
This paper assignment has several purposes. As the first major paper for this class, the Point of View Essay is designed to re-engage you with the fundamentals of all good writing, including using lush sensory details to show the reader a particular place (rather than tell them about it), basic organization, clear focus, etc. However, this unit does not function as a mere review. The Point of View Essay will also introduce you to the concept of "thinking and seeing rhetorically, and analyzing writing rhetorically"--using the Writer's Toolbox described in this unit to improve your writing and critical reading skills. Finally, the Point of View Essay allows you to reflect on this process.
The Assignment:
1. Pleasant/Unpleasant Description of the Place:
Choose a place you can observe for an extended period of time (at least 20-30 minutes). Use all of your senses (sight, hearing, touch, smell, even taste if possible) to experience the place, and record all of the sensations that you experience. As you record your data, you may wish to note which details naturally seem more positive, negative, or neutral, in terms of tone. (For instance, a stinky and overflowing trash barrel swarming with flies in a nearby alley might seem more inherently negative than a little white bunny rabbit hopping playfully across the lawn.) Then, you will use this information to help your write descriptions of the place: one positive, one negative. Both descriptions should be factually true (same real time and real place), but you will want one description to be positive in terms of tone and the other to be negative. In addition to including the information and sensory details you've collected as the basis for these descriptions, you will also use the Writer's Toolbox to create your two contrasting impressions for this assignment. (The Writer's Toolbox is explained in the Lecture Notes section of this unit.) As you revise and refine your descriptions, please be sure you are "showing" your readers your place (really putting the readers "there" in the moment and in this scene), rather than simply "telling" them about it. You will also want to try to eliminate unnecessary linking verbs as much as you can, incorporating verbs that show "action" whenever possible.
2. Rhetorical Analysis:
Looking back at your descriptions, analyze how you created these two very different impressions of the place (one positive, one negative) without changing any of the facts. How did you make your place seem so positive in one paragraph and yet so negative in the other paragraph, without changing the facts? Discuss how you incorporated each of the tools from the Writer's Toolbox, and cite examples of this from each of your descriptions. (This.
Major Paper #1--The Point of View EssayWe will be working on this .docxeubanksnefen
Major Paper #1--The Point of View Essay
We will be working on this paper for the next three units. The final draft of the paper--with all three sections described below--will be due at the end of Unit #4.
Purpose:
This paper assignment has several purposes. As the first major paper for this class, the Point of View Essay is designed to re-engage you with the fundamentals of all good writing, including using lush sensory details to show the reader a particular place (rather than tell them about it), basic organization, clear focus, etc. However, this unit does not function as a mere review. The Point of View Essay will also introduce you to the concept of "thinking and seeing rhetorically, and analyzing writing rhetorically"--using the Writer's Toolbox described in this unit to improve your writing and critical reading skills. Finally, the Point of View Essay allows you to reflect on this process.
The Assignment:
1. Pleasant/Unpleasant Description of the Place:
Choose a place you can observe for an extended period of time (at least 20-30 minutes). Use all of your senses (sight, hearing, touch, smell, even taste if possible) to experience the place, and record all of the sensations that you experience. As you record your data, you may wish to note which details naturally seem more positive, negative, or neutral, in terms of tone. (For instance, a stinky and overflowing trash barrel swarming with flies in a nearby alley might seem more inherently negative than a little white bunny rabbit hopping playfully across the lawn.) Then, you will use this information to help your write descriptions of the place: one positive, one negative. Both descriptions should be factually true (same real time and real place), but you will want one description to be positive in terms of tone and the other to be negative. In addition to including the information and sensory details you've collected as the basis for these descriptions, you will also use the Writer's Toolbox to create your two contrasting impressions for this assignment. (The Writer's Toolbox is explained in the Lecture Notes section of this unit.) As you revise and refine your descriptions, please be sure you are "showing" your readers your place (really putting the readers "there" in the moment and in this scene), rather than simply "telling" them about it. You will also want to try to eliminate unnecessary linking verbs as much as you can, incorporating verbs that show "action" whenever possible.
2. Rhetorical Analysis:
Looking back at your descriptions, analyze how you created these two very different impressions of the place (one positive, one negative) without changing any of the facts. How did you make your place seem so positive in one paragraph and yet so negative in the other paragraph, without changing the facts? Discuss how you incorporated each of the tools from the Writer's Toolbox, and cite examples of this from each of your descriptions. (This analysis should be at l.
Descriptive Narrative Essay Assignment Sheet
Descriptive Narrative Essay
What is a descriptive narrative essay?
In these essays, the writer tells a story using the senses of taste, sight, smell, hearing, and touch to help the readers experience the story and events surrounding it.
What is the purpose?
Often you will be asked, “What happened?” and daily you experience through what you taste, what you listen to, what you see, what you smell, and what you touch. If someone asks you to describe something, you want to do so in the best, fullest way. If someone asks you to “What happened?”, you should be able to tell the story in an organized way. Often police officers, nurses, social workers, and many others are asked to give case studies or explain what happened in a particular event. They must communicate these events (i.e. stories) often in writing.
Where do I find a topic?
Think of events that have shaped who you are. Is there a moment when you realized what field you wanted to study in college? Did you go on a vacation that changed your view about a culture or place?
Whatever you choose, you should not need secondary research.
Real or Imaginary?
Either is fine.
How long does it have to be?
2 to 3 double-spaced pages
What am I graded on?
Focus and development
Author provides an appropriate and interesting title.
Author tells a story in chronological order and gives detailed descriptions, using multiple senses.
Essay is 2 to 3 pages.
Audience and voice
Author writes to a target audience, and this audience is appropriate for the subject.
The voice is appropriate for and engages the audience.
Word choice is appropriate for the audience.
Author uses effective and interesting sentences throughout the essay.
Cohesion and coherence
Transitions (connections between ideas, sentences, and paragraphs) guide the readers.
Essay and ideas within are organized logically.
Sentence structures and beginnings are varied.
Formal elements of academic discourse
Author uses correct punctuation, spelling, and grammar.
Writing process
Author follows a process that includes some prewriting, drafting, revising, and editing.
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Major Paper #1 The Point of View EssayPurpose This paper assi.docxssuser47f0be
Major Paper #1: The Point of View Essay
Purpose:
This paper assignment has several purposes. As the first major paper for this class, the Point of View Essay is designed to re-engage you with the fundamentals of all good writing, including using lush sensory details to show the reader a particular place (rather than tell them about it), basic organization, clear focus, etc. However, this unit does not function as a mere review. The Point of View Essay will also introduce you to the concept of "thinking and seeing rhetorically, and analyzing writing rhetorically"--using the Writer's Toolbox described in this unit to improve your writing and critical reading skills. Finally, the Point of View Essay allows you to reflect on this process.
The Assignment:
Pleasant/Unpleasant Description of the Place:
Choose a place you can observe for an extended period of time (at least 20-30 minutes). Use all of your senses (sight, hearing, touch, smell, even taste if possible) to experience the place, and record all of the sensations that you experience. As you record your data, you may wish to note which details naturally seem more positive, negative, or neutral, in terms of tone. (For instance, a stinky and overflowing trash barrel swarming with flies in a nearby alley might seem more inherently negative than a little white bunny rabbit hopping playfully across the lawn.) Then, you will use this information to help your write descriptions of the place: one positive, one negative. Both descriptions should be factually true (same real time and real place), but you will want one description to be positive in terms of tone and the other to be negative. In addition to including the information and sensory details you've collected as the basis for these descriptions, you will also use the Writer's Toolbox to create your two contrasting impressions for this assignment. (The Writer's Toolbox is explained in the Lecture Notes section of this unit.) As you revise and refine your descriptions, please be sure you are "showing" your readers your place (really putting the readers "there" in the moment and in this scene), rather than simply "telling" them about it. You will also want to try to eliminate unnecessary linking verbs as much as you can, incorporating verbs that show "action" whenever possible.
Rhetorical Analysis:
Looking back at your descriptions, analyze how you created these two very different impressions of the place (one positive, one negative) without changing any of the facts. How did you make your place seem so positive in one paragraph and yet so negative in the other paragraph, without changing the facts? Discuss how you incorporated each of the tools from the Writer's Toolbox, and cite examples of this from each of your descriptions. (This analysis should be at least 400-500 words in length.)
Reflection:
In one to two paragraphs, consider at least one of the following questions: What have you learned about writing through this as ...
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2. • Definition
• A descriptive essay describes a certain object, situation,
experienced emotion or a place he has been to or even an
imaginary place.
• An important thing for a descriptive essay is the usage of sensory
details: sight, sound, touch, smell and taste to create for the reader
the same picture that you have in your mind.
• Instead of using ambiguous, general words, the sensory language
should be precise. Descriptive essays also demands varying of
sentence structure and use of comparisons.
3. • If there's one thing you should remember as you write your
descriptive essay, it's the famous saying: show don't tell. But
what's the difference between showing and telling? Consider
these two simple examples:
I grew tired after dinner.
As I leaned back and rested my head against the top of the chair, my
eyelids began to feel heavy, and the edges of the empty plate in front
of me blurred with the white tablecloth.
4. • A good descriptive essay has to:
Give a vivid description of the subject of description;
Include all the smallest and important details;
Demonstrate the author’s emotional response caused by the subject;
Exclude every single irrelevant detail;
5. Structuring a Descriptive Essay
1) Introduction:
• The author represents the reasons why he describes a person, object or
situation.
• It should start with a strong opening, for example, a quotation that grabs
the reader’s attention.
• A thesis statement that should be related to the subject of description
and reveals the reason he describes it.
6. I have always been fascinated by carnival rides. It amazes me
that average, ordinary people eagerly trade in the serenity of the
ground for the chance to be tossed through the air like
vegetables in a food processor. It amazes me that at some time
in history someone thought that people would enjoy this, and
that person invented what must have been the first of these
terrifying machines. For me, it is precisely the thrill and
excitement of having survived the ride that keeps me coming
back for more.
7. 2) Body: In the body there are three paragraphs:
• 2.1. Paragraph № 1 – The object itself: Here the author provides a vivid description of
the object. He includes all the observed details that are important for making a vivid portrait
and uses metaphors and comparison.
• 2.2. Paragraph № 2 – The surroundings: The author describes the atmosphere and
surroundings of an object, person, or situation. The reader should feel involved in this
environment. Metaphors and comparison are used in this paragraph.
• 2.3. Paragraph № 3 – Sensual and emotional description: The writer uses his senses of
taste, touch, smell, sound, sight and emotional description in order to make the experience
“alive”. In other words here the author needs to “replay” the object, person or situation to
the reader. Metaphors and comparison are also used here.
8. My first experience with a carnival ride was a Ferris wheel at
a local fair. Looking at that looming monstrosity spinning the
life out of its sardine-caged occupants, I was dumbstruck. It
was huge, smoky, noisy and not a little intimidating. Ever since
that initial impression became fossilized in my imagination
many years ago, these rides have reminded me of mythical
beasts, amazing dinosaurs carrying off their screaming
passengers like sacrificial virgins. Even the droning sound of
their engines brings to mind the great roar of a fire-breathing
dragon with smoke spewing from its exhaust-pipe nostrils.
9. 3) Conclusion:
Restate the meaning and idea of this experience for the
writer;
the importance of the described things;
the reason he actually describes it to the reader;
reframe the thesis statement
summarize the emotional and physical attitude of the writer.
10. My fascination with these fantastic flights is
deeply engrained in my soul. A trip on the wonderful
Ferris wheel never fails to thrill me. Although I am
becoming older and have less time, or less
inclination, to play, the child-like thrill I have on a
Ferris wheel continues with each and every ride.
11. Quick Tips for Writing Your Descriptive Essay
a) Planning your descriptive essay:
What or who do you want to describe?
What is your reason for writing your description?
What are the particular qualities that you want to
focus on?
12. b) Drafting your descriptive essay:
What sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and textures are
important for developing your description?
Which details can you include to ensure that your
readers gain a vivid impression imbued with your
emotion or perspective?
13. c) Revising your descriptive essay:
Have you provided enough details and descriptions to enable your
readers to gain a complete perception?
Have you left out any minor but important details?
Have you used words that convey your emotion or perspective?
Are there any unnecessary details in your description?
Does each paragraph of your essay focus on one aspect of your
description?
Are your paragraphs ordered in the most effective way?
14. Write a descriptive essay about a topic of your choice
(object, situation, experience, experienced emotion or a
place ).