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Chapter 8 Review: Paraphrasing
                  Chapter 9 Review: Revising an Essay
                   Topic Generation: Group Exercise
Writers on Writing: Alex Haley (1976) ; Joyce Carol Oates; John Updike;
                    Ray Bradbury ; James Michener




                         “All good
                         writing is
                        rewriting.”
                        anonymous


EN 102– NON-FICTION UNIT
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit

CLASS POLL: How many people have chosen a
topic? (Show of hands)

How many people have research done, and
have a draft of the essay?

How many people don’t know where to start?
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit

 Chapter 8 –An Informal Outline / Writing a
    Paragraph (p366).
   Outlines help organize information
   Paragraph: Topic sentences
   Page 368: Practice! (2 sentences)
   Page 370: More Practice!! ( 2 sentences)
   Good paragraphs keep your writing flowing…
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit

 Chapter 8 – Paraphrasing (p 377)


 Read the excerpt “The Fringe Benefits of
  Failure, and the Importance of Imagination”

 Practice the excerpt at the bottom of 377.


 Paraphrase and Quotation
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit

  Chapter 8 – Practice Combining Paraphrase
    and Quotation (4 sentences) on page 379

 FINAL TIPS: Review prewriting; questions?
 Form a purpose (thesis)
 Forecast in the thesis to organize
 Paragraphs– focused?
 Give credit (avoid plagarism!)
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit

 Chapter 9 – Revising an Essay (p 381)
 CHECKLIST: Aim ; Support; Organization
 Introduction, Conclusion
(Sets tone, forecasts, and brings closure)
 Paragraphs, sentences, wording
(Pacing, structure, consistency of tone)
 Style, mechanics
(Clarity, comprehension, ease of reading)
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit
Transitions (p391) Key word repetition: transitions between
paragraphs.

COHERENCE = The ease of understanding ideas, the completeness
of development, and the “holding together” of the entire piece.

Transition terms:

Time: first, second, before, then, next, meantime, meanwhile, finally,
at last , eventually.. Etc.

Spatial: above, below, inside, outside, across, along, in front of,
behind, beyond, there, here, in the distance, etc.

Contrast: In contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, still,
however, yet, but, nevertheless, despite, even so, etc.

Compare: similarly, in the same way

Examples: Causes (effects): Conclusions:… (p392).
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit
Page 366– The outline for the essay on page 387--- read both the
introduction, and conclusion. Is it compelling? Is it cohesive? Go
to p 398 –Introductions…

                                  Direct
                                  quotes




                 Describe        Intro          Question




                                Anecdote
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit
These are other ways to write an introduction: I’ve added narrative as a
possible way to start your essay, as well.



                                Contradict




                  Stat /
                  Fact          Intro            Mixture




                                 Narrative
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit
Conclusions (p 401) …”Ideally, the conclusion should fit like the lid on
a box.” Good conclusions: reinforce the idea of the essay, give a
feeling of completion, satisfaction, a sense of closure. Also, they may
suggest a possible future, a solution, or leave a sense of hope, or
wonder.

Read the conclusions listed on 401-2.

What makes these conclusions effective?
                           TIPS: Use a key
                             word, a key
                               image,
                            Or answer the
                           question posed
                                in the
                            introduction.
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit

        Gather into 4 groups: designate a writer for the White board.
   Next: Using the strips of paper provided, write a broad topic, and fold in
                             half: place tab in hat.
                Finally: Pick a strip, and wait for instructions.




In five minutes time, your group must develop as many sub-topics as possible:
The Group with the most topics wins 5 points.

NEXT: Pick a sub-topic: prepare an outline (informal), introduction, and
conclusion (one sentence a piece), and a beginning thesis: Group with best
wins 5 points.
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit
Writers on Writing:

Alex Haley, on writing / researching “Roots”

James Michener, on being a “slow starter”

Joyce Carol Oates, on being a productive writer

Isaac Asimov, on writing his 200th book

John Updike, on writing “Bech is Back”
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit
Read Chapter 10 for next class: Writing To Persuade (p 404)

We will begin our “Hero/ Advocate” paper next week. (Details
forthcoming…)

Bring a paper copy of the Non-fiction paper for peer editing for the
beginning of Class Twelve.


REMEMBER : Non-Fiction Essay DUE: 7995 -- April 1
                                  7766-- April 13
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit
EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit

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Class eleven

  • 1. Chapter 8 Review: Paraphrasing Chapter 9 Review: Revising an Essay Topic Generation: Group Exercise Writers on Writing: Alex Haley (1976) ; Joyce Carol Oates; John Updike; Ray Bradbury ; James Michener “All good writing is rewriting.” anonymous EN 102– NON-FICTION UNIT
  • 2. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit CLASS POLL: How many people have chosen a topic? (Show of hands) How many people have research done, and have a draft of the essay? How many people don’t know where to start?
  • 3. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit  Chapter 8 –An Informal Outline / Writing a Paragraph (p366).  Outlines help organize information  Paragraph: Topic sentences  Page 368: Practice! (2 sentences)  Page 370: More Practice!! ( 2 sentences)  Good paragraphs keep your writing flowing…
  • 4. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit  Chapter 8 – Paraphrasing (p 377)  Read the excerpt “The Fringe Benefits of Failure, and the Importance of Imagination”  Practice the excerpt at the bottom of 377.  Paraphrase and Quotation
  • 5. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit  Chapter 8 – Practice Combining Paraphrase and Quotation (4 sentences) on page 379  FINAL TIPS: Review prewriting; questions?  Form a purpose (thesis)  Forecast in the thesis to organize  Paragraphs– focused?  Give credit (avoid plagarism!)
  • 6. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit  Chapter 9 – Revising an Essay (p 381)  CHECKLIST: Aim ; Support; Organization  Introduction, Conclusion (Sets tone, forecasts, and brings closure)  Paragraphs, sentences, wording (Pacing, structure, consistency of tone)  Style, mechanics (Clarity, comprehension, ease of reading)
  • 7. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit Transitions (p391) Key word repetition: transitions between paragraphs. COHERENCE = The ease of understanding ideas, the completeness of development, and the “holding together” of the entire piece. Transition terms: Time: first, second, before, then, next, meantime, meanwhile, finally, at last , eventually.. Etc. Spatial: above, below, inside, outside, across, along, in front of, behind, beyond, there, here, in the distance, etc. Contrast: In contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, still, however, yet, but, nevertheless, despite, even so, etc. Compare: similarly, in the same way Examples: Causes (effects): Conclusions:… (p392).
  • 8. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit Page 366– The outline for the essay on page 387--- read both the introduction, and conclusion. Is it compelling? Is it cohesive? Go to p 398 –Introductions… Direct quotes Describe Intro Question Anecdote
  • 9. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit These are other ways to write an introduction: I’ve added narrative as a possible way to start your essay, as well. Contradict Stat / Fact Intro Mixture Narrative
  • 10. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit Conclusions (p 401) …”Ideally, the conclusion should fit like the lid on a box.” Good conclusions: reinforce the idea of the essay, give a feeling of completion, satisfaction, a sense of closure. Also, they may suggest a possible future, a solution, or leave a sense of hope, or wonder. Read the conclusions listed on 401-2. What makes these conclusions effective? TIPS: Use a key word, a key image, Or answer the question posed in the introduction.
  • 11. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit Gather into 4 groups: designate a writer for the White board. Next: Using the strips of paper provided, write a broad topic, and fold in half: place tab in hat. Finally: Pick a strip, and wait for instructions. In five minutes time, your group must develop as many sub-topics as possible: The Group with the most topics wins 5 points. NEXT: Pick a sub-topic: prepare an outline (informal), introduction, and conclusion (one sentence a piece), and a beginning thesis: Group with best wins 5 points.
  • 12. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit Writers on Writing: Alex Haley, on writing / researching “Roots” James Michener, on being a “slow starter” Joyce Carol Oates, on being a productive writer Isaac Asimov, on writing his 200th book John Updike, on writing “Bech is Back”
  • 13. EN 102– Non-Fiction Unit Read Chapter 10 for next class: Writing To Persuade (p 404) We will begin our “Hero/ Advocate” paper next week. (Details forthcoming…) Bring a paper copy of the Non-fiction paper for peer editing for the beginning of Class Twelve. REMEMBER : Non-Fiction Essay DUE: 7995 -- April 1 7766-- April 13