Summary, Conclusions and
Recommendations
Chapter 5
A. Summary of Findings
B. Conclusion
C. Some Dangers to Avoid in Drawing up
Conclusions Based on Quantitative Data
D. Recommendation
E. Evaluation of a Thesis or Dissertation
There should be a brief statement about:
• the main purpose of the study
• the population or respondents
• the period of the study
• method of research used
• the research instrument
• the sampling design
1
Teaching science in the
high schools of Province A
Example:
This was conducted for the purpose of
determining the status of teaching science in
the high schools of Province A. The descriptive
method is used of research was utilized and
the nominative survey technique was used for
gathering data. The questionnaire served as
the instrument for collecting data. All the
teachers handling science and a 20 percent
representative sample of the students were the
respondents. The inquiry was conducted
during the school year 1989-’90.
There should be no explanation made.
2
The findings may be lumped up all
together but clarity demands that
each specific question under the
statement of the problem must be
written first to be followed by the
findings.
How qualified are the teachers handling science
in the high schools of Province A?
Of the 59 teachers, 31 or 53.54 percent were
BSE graduates and three or 5.08 percent were
MA degree holders. The rest, 25 or 42.37
percent, were non-BSE baccalaureate degree
holders with at least 18 education units. Less
than half of all the teachers, only 27 or 45.76
percent were science majors and the majority,
32 or 54.24 percent were non-science majors.
The findings should be textual
generalization, that is a summary of
the important data consisting of
text and numbers.
3
Only the important findings, the
highlights of the data, should be
included in the summary.
4
5
Findings are not explained nor
elaborated upon anymore.
6
No new data should be introduced
in the summary of findings.
1
Conclusions
Inferences, deductions, abstractions,
implications, interpretations, general
statements, and/or generalizations
based upon the findings.
They should not contain any numerals
Findings:
Of the 59 teachers, 31 or 53.54 percent were
BSE graduates and three or 5.08 percent were
MA degree holders. The rest, 25 or 42.37
percent, were non-BSE baccalaureate degree
holders with at least 18 education units. Less
than half of all the teachers,
only 27 or 45.76 percent were science majors
and the majority, 32 or 54.24 percent were
non-science majors.
Conclusion
All the teachers were qualified to teach
in the high school but the majority of
them were not qualified to teach
science.
2
Conclusions should appropriately
answer the specific questions raised
at the beginning of the investigation
in order they are given under the
statement of the problem.
Q: “How adequate are the facilities for
teaching science?”
A: “The facilities for the teaching of
science are inadequate”.
Example:
3
Conclusions should point out
what were factually learned
from the inquiry.
No conclusion should be drawn from
the implied or indirect effects of the
findings.
Teachers were not qualified to teach science
and the science facilities were inadequate.
Teaching in the high schools of Province A
was weak.
The conclusion should be based
upon the responses to the question.
4
Conclusions should be
formulated concisely, that is,
brief and short.
5
Without any strong evidence to
the contrary, conclusions should
be stated categorically.
6
Conclusions should refer only
to the population, area, or
subject of the study.
Conclusions should not be
repetitions of any statements
anywhere in the thesis.
7
Some Dangers
to Avoid in Drawing
up Conclusions Based
on Quantitative Data
Bias
1
A respondent to a questionnaire
may commit bias to protect his own
interest.
2
Incorrect
Generalization
High income group is over represented
and low income group is under
represented.
An incorrect generalization is made when
there is a limited body of information or
when the sample is not representative of
the population.
3
Incorrect
Deduction
Science facilities are inadequate
Any particular tool is inadequate
School C: 20 microscope
School D: 8 microscope
4
Incorrect
Comparison
School C: 1,500 students
School D: 500 students
Ratio:
School C: 75 students is to one microscope
School D : 63 students to one microscope
School C: 20 microscope
School D: 8 microscope
A basic error in statistical work is to
compare two things that are not really
comparable.
5
Abuse of
correlation data
When the government increases the
price of gasoline
the prices of commodities also starts
to rise
6
Limited information
furnished by any one
ratio.
20% loss of employee
Death Retirement Poor Salary
Avoid as much as possible making
conclusions not sufficiently and
adequately supported by facts.
7
Misleading impression
concerning magnitude
of variables
College A:
75% of its graduates passed the CPA exam
College B:
100% of its graduates who took the same
exam passed.
College A: 4 graduates
College B: 1 graduate
Recommendations
Guidelines in writing recommendations
Recommendations should aim to
solve or help solve problems
discovered in the investigation.
1
Problem Recommendation
Inadequate facilities = Acquire more facility
2
No recommendations should be
made for a problem, or any thing for
that matter, that has not been
discovered or discussed in the study.
3
There may also be
recommendations for the
continuance of a good practice or
system, or even recommendation
for its improvement.
Recommendations should aim
for the ideal but they must be
feasible, practical, and
attainable. It is useless to
recommend the impossible.
4
Recommendations should be logical
and valid. If the problem is the lack
of facilities, it is only logical to
recommend the acquisition of the
lacking facilities.
5
Problem Recommendation
Inadequate facilities = Acquire more facility
Recommendations should be
addressed to the persons,
entities, agencies, or offices who
or which are in a position to
implement them.
6
Inadequate facilities = ex. School Principal
There should be a
recommendation for further
research on the same topic in
other places to verify, amplify, or
negate the findings of the study.
7
Evaluation of a Thesis
or Dissertation
I. The Subject and the
Problems
II.The Design of the Study
III.The Data (Findings)
IV.Conclusions
(Generalizations)
V. Recommendations

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    Chapter 5 A. Summaryof Findings B. Conclusion C. Some Dangers to Avoid in Drawing up Conclusions Based on Quantitative Data D. Recommendation E. Evaluation of a Thesis or Dissertation
  • 4.
    There should bea brief statement about: • the main purpose of the study • the population or respondents • the period of the study • method of research used • the research instrument • the sampling design 1
  • 5.
    Teaching science inthe high schools of Province A Example:
  • 6.
    This was conductedfor the purpose of determining the status of teaching science in the high schools of Province A. The descriptive method is used of research was utilized and the nominative survey technique was used for gathering data. The questionnaire served as the instrument for collecting data. All the teachers handling science and a 20 percent representative sample of the students were the respondents. The inquiry was conducted during the school year 1989-’90.
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    There should beno explanation made.
  • 8.
    2 The findings maybe lumped up all together but clarity demands that each specific question under the statement of the problem must be written first to be followed by the findings.
  • 9.
    How qualified arethe teachers handling science in the high schools of Province A? Of the 59 teachers, 31 or 53.54 percent were BSE graduates and three or 5.08 percent were MA degree holders. The rest, 25 or 42.37 percent, were non-BSE baccalaureate degree holders with at least 18 education units. Less than half of all the teachers, only 27 or 45.76 percent were science majors and the majority, 32 or 54.24 percent were non-science majors.
  • 10.
    The findings shouldbe textual generalization, that is a summary of the important data consisting of text and numbers. 3
  • 11.
    Only the importantfindings, the highlights of the data, should be included in the summary. 4
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    5 Findings are notexplained nor elaborated upon anymore.
  • 13.
    6 No new datashould be introduced in the summary of findings.
  • 15.
    1 Conclusions Inferences, deductions, abstractions, implications,interpretations, general statements, and/or generalizations based upon the findings. They should not contain any numerals
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    Findings: Of the 59teachers, 31 or 53.54 percent were BSE graduates and three or 5.08 percent were MA degree holders. The rest, 25 or 42.37 percent, were non-BSE baccalaureate degree holders with at least 18 education units. Less than half of all the teachers, only 27 or 45.76 percent were science majors and the majority, 32 or 54.24 percent were non-science majors.
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    Conclusion All the teacherswere qualified to teach in the high school but the majority of them were not qualified to teach science.
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    2 Conclusions should appropriately answerthe specific questions raised at the beginning of the investigation in order they are given under the statement of the problem.
  • 19.
    Q: “How adequateare the facilities for teaching science?” A: “The facilities for the teaching of science are inadequate”. Example:
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    3 Conclusions should pointout what were factually learned from the inquiry. No conclusion should be drawn from the implied or indirect effects of the findings.
  • 21.
    Teachers were notqualified to teach science and the science facilities were inadequate. Teaching in the high schools of Province A was weak.
  • 22.
    The conclusion shouldbe based upon the responses to the question.
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    4 Conclusions should be formulatedconcisely, that is, brief and short.
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    5 Without any strongevidence to the contrary, conclusions should be stated categorically.
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    6 Conclusions should referonly to the population, area, or subject of the study.
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    Conclusions should notbe repetitions of any statements anywhere in the thesis. 7
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    Some Dangers to Avoidin Drawing up Conclusions Based on Quantitative Data
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    A respondent toa questionnaire may commit bias to protect his own interest.
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    High income groupis over represented and low income group is under represented. An incorrect generalization is made when there is a limited body of information or when the sample is not representative of the population.
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    Science facilities areinadequate Any particular tool is inadequate
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    School C: 20microscope School D: 8 microscope
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    School C: 1,500students School D: 500 students Ratio: School C: 75 students is to one microscope School D : 63 students to one microscope School C: 20 microscope School D: 8 microscope
  • 37.
    A basic errorin statistical work is to compare two things that are not really comparable.
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    When the governmentincreases the price of gasoline the prices of commodities also starts to rise
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    20% loss ofemployee Death Retirement Poor Salary
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    Avoid as muchas possible making conclusions not sufficiently and adequately supported by facts.
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    College A: 75% ofits graduates passed the CPA exam College B: 100% of its graduates who took the same exam passed. College A: 4 graduates College B: 1 graduate
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    Recommendations should aimto solve or help solve problems discovered in the investigation. 1 Problem Recommendation Inadequate facilities = Acquire more facility
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    2 No recommendations shouldbe made for a problem, or any thing for that matter, that has not been discovered or discussed in the study.
  • 49.
    3 There may alsobe recommendations for the continuance of a good practice or system, or even recommendation for its improvement.
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    Recommendations should aim forthe ideal but they must be feasible, practical, and attainable. It is useless to recommend the impossible. 4
  • 51.
    Recommendations should belogical and valid. If the problem is the lack of facilities, it is only logical to recommend the acquisition of the lacking facilities. 5 Problem Recommendation Inadequate facilities = Acquire more facility
  • 52.
    Recommendations should be addressedto the persons, entities, agencies, or offices who or which are in a position to implement them. 6 Inadequate facilities = ex. School Principal
  • 53.
    There should bea recommendation for further research on the same topic in other places to verify, amplify, or negate the findings of the study. 7
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    Evaluation of aThesis or Dissertation
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    I. The Subjectand the Problems II.The Design of the Study III.The Data (Findings) IV.Conclusions (Generalizations) V. Recommendations