this presentation deals with the unity of paragraphs. Unity (oneness) is important in academic writing. The presentation presents the steps to make a paragraph relevant and about one topic.

1. Paragraph Unity
Abdulaziz Assanosi
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Main Source:
First Steps in Academic Writing (Level 2)
Second Edition
By: AN Hogue
Pearson Longman

2. THROUGH all the paragraph
 The sentences should be about one topic.
 English language has many uses. First, it is
useful in education. It helps in learning and
studying. Second, it helps in travelling. We use it in
airport and hotels. English is used in Uk and USA
and many other countries. Third, it is vital for
computer and technology.

3.  Relevant means directly related to the main
idea.
 English language has many uses. First, it is
useful in education. It helps in learning and
studying. Second, it helps in travelling. We
use it in airport and hotels. English is used in
Uk and USA and many other country. Third, it
is vital for computer and technology.

4.  California also had Hollywood and
Disneyland, which are world-famous centre
of entertainment.
 California is so popular place to live, so many
people move there every year.

5. IRRELEVANT SENTENCES IN PARAGRAPH 2
P47
Doctors need to stay calm at
emergencies, too.
There is a shortage of nurses
today, so they earn good salaries.