The document outlines several proposed changes to the original ideas for a film about a tomboy named Abbie. Changes include giving Abbie straight hair that is experimentally curled by her friend Anna, as well as a complete makeover montage. The summary also provides an outline for scene 1 where Anna does Abbie's hair makeover without revealing their faces at first, and a proposed scene schedule that follows Abbie as she gains popularity but struggles with her schoolwork after the makeover.

1. Changes made to original
ideas
LO2 – Unit 16

2. Idea 1
• Changes include:
• Different job, not selling pens.
• New job: door-to-door representative for office/workplace
equipment.

3. • Changes include:
• New names for Heather and Veronica.
• = Abbie and Anna
• Girls never change the Abbie’s name in the film

4. Idea 2
• Changes include:
• It is quite difficult to do a film with blue hair school.
• So,
• I think I am going to change it to Abbie being a tomboy with straight hair,
dull clothes no makeup. To start Abbie is getting her hair done by
experimental head dresser and friend, Anna. Her straight hair turns very
curly.
• She then Is persuaded by Anna that it suits her and how she should take up
the opportunity before the curls die down, to look more girly and less
tomboy.
• She gets a complete make over montage done by Anna.

5. • Changes include: Scene 1
• Abbie is the guinepig for Anna hair dressing-course work. To add to her portfolio.
• We see a close up on Abbie straight hair and Anna with scissors, hair brush, dye and curling irons.
Quick clips.
• However we haven’t seen the faces yet.
• Whilst Anna is washing out Abbie’s hair, they are talking about how well Abbie is doing at school.
This introduces Abbie as being a good, bright student. Still haven’t seen there faces.
• Then we go to Anna drying Abbie’s hair
• Abbie stands up in front of the mirror in horror. That when we are introduced to both Abbie and
Anna’s faces.
• Anna says how she look more like a girl and persuade Abbie to let her give her a makeover.

6. • Changes include: scene 1(b)
• We then go into a makeover montage of clothes and makeup.

7. • Changes include: scene schedule:
• 1, hair style and make over (3 mins)
• 2, next day, in school with new make over, everyone notices Abbie, get stopped by popular girls and they ask to
hang out with them (2/3 mins)
• 3, next day, walks into school and hangs out with them and leave Anna out//montage// (1 min)
• 4, she gets held behind to talk to the teacher about her poor grades, gets given detention there. girls are waiting
outside the door and are pleased she failed because it makes her cool. they walk away. (2/3 mins)
• 5, at home, dad received a phone from school saying that Abbie is failing school. they have an argument. (2 mins)
• 6, next day, girls ask Abbie to spread rumour, Abbie and Anna spilt. They argue about rumour that’s spread and also
Abbie says that it’s Anna’s fault for giving her makeover. (3 mins)
• 7, stands up either in auditorium or common room and Abbie gives announcement. (3 mins)
• 8, next term, she's with Anna (with normal hair and normal clothes), they’re walking into class, she sits down and
gets given back her paper with an ‘A’ on it. (1 min)