The document summarizes feedback received from peers on a music video created by Shafaah and Jenna. The feedback was generally positive, with peers noting they enjoyed the variety of shots, narrative concept, and lighting. Some felt the pacing could have been faster or lip syncing improved. Most agreed the video followed music video conventions and had a strong tie to the genre of the song. In conclusion, the document notes that while some feedback was helpful, many responses just gave yes or no answers without elaboration, making it difficult for the creators to understand how to strengthen the video.

1. Audience
Feedback
Tik Tok
Shafaah & Jenna

2. Do you think the product is
typical of a music video?
Judging by the answers
given to us by our peers it
obvious that our music
video is in fact a typical Yes
example of the music No
video genre.
“there were a variety of shots and
it kept me entertained throughout”

3. Does it break away from the
usual conventions of a music
video? If yes then how?
Again our music video is
viewed as following the
conventions of its genre,
how ever we would have
thought that the simplicity Yes
of it would have made it No
break away ever so
slightly.
“not really, however liked the
narrative concept”

4. Did the pace of the video
match that of the song?
Many of our class mates did
believe that the pace of our
music video matched that of
the song, how ever a select
few did not have the same Yes
views as every one else. No
“it could have gone faster”
“not really, no…”

5. Name an interesting element
of the music video
When asked to
name interesting
elements from our Lighting
product our Greenscreening
Editing
audience were Range of shots
much more Location
elaborative in their Performance
answers.
“the lighting was quality!”
“I liked the range of shots… fast paced through out, bravo!”

6. Could the video be stronger?
If yes how?
Admittedly the lip syncing had
gone slightly out of sync due different location
to a glitch with the editing, so more outfits
the need to alter that was lip syncing
more shots
already in mind. The need for backing dancers
“more backing dancers” and faster editing
“prettier/more outfits” shows
that the explanation of our
Urban Down to Earth Pop
brand image wasn’t taken
into consideration.

7. Does the genre of the song tie
in with the music video?
The majority of our audience
believed that there was a
strong link between the music
video and our chosen song’s
genre. A select few did not
yes
due to the editing not being no
“fast enough”. How ever in my
opinion and the opinion of
most of the audience the
music video and song genre
worked very well together
“Yes, brilliantly!”

8. Conclusion…
In retrospect I believe that our audience gave
some very sound feedback, which helped us to
understand just how much we could do to
make a product much stronger. Although we
appreciated the comments some were just not
adequate, the whole of feedback was for the
audience to tell us what they wanted not simply
give us yes and no answers which in the long
run made it much more difficult for Jenna and I
to actually understand what our audience as a
whole needed from our product.