The document discusses feedback received from the target audience on a music video pitch. The audience felt the pitch would be successful. They suggested incorporating dancing, narrative, and conventions of genre to make the video more conventional as a pop music video. Having a narrative storyline is considered conventional for pop music videos, so that should be included to entertain the audience. The audience also felt the chosen song fit conventionally with the story line.

2.  From this question I am able to learn that my target audience feel that my pitch
will be successful for my music video.

3.  I am able to learn from this question that my target audience feel in order to make
my music video better I need to involve dancing, narrative and conventions of
form and genre in order for my music video to be conventional to a pop music
video.

4.  From this question I am able to learn that having a narrative story line is
conventional to pop music videos, so I will make sure I will involve a narrative
story line to keep my target audience entertained.

5.  I am able to learn from this question that my target audience feel that my song
links conventionally to my story line because they can’t think of another song
which would fit even better.