The document discusses feedback received on a concept pitch. The feedback was mostly positive about the concept's suitability for the target audience and achievability with college equipment. Some concerns were raised about technical issues with locations and lighting. To address these issues, the group plans to get location permission, ensure lighting can be achieved, and look into camera equipment. They will also focus efforts on making costumes and props look realistic by splitting up production tasks. As no alternative suggestions were received, the group will continue developing their initial ideas.

2. Do you feel that our concept is suitable for our
target audience?
0 “Yes, I think it’s a good idea”
0 “Yes, the concept is suitable for your target audience”
0 “Yes, its interesting and different and I think your
audience profile will like it”
0 “Yes, very much so with all the crazy clowns and
random stuff”

3. Do you think our idea is achievable with college
equipment?
0 “Think its achievable and the location is good”
0 “Yes pretty sure”
0 “Yes!”
0 “Yes, no problems with tech”

4. Do you think our idea is going to look realistic?
0 “Yeah I think you can make it look realistic and
the idea can be taken many ways”
0 “Yes”
0 “Yes it will look very very very good!!!”
0 “Will look realistic if you try hard”

5. Do you feel anything in our pitch isn’t going to
work?
0 “No I think it will work”
0 “Yes”
0 “Ask the assembly rooms”
0 “May be an issue with assembly rooms and
lighting”

6. Overall the feedback was very positive however we
received a few criticisms regarding the technical issues
and planning. To address these issues we are going to get
permission for our desired location and making sure that
the lighting is going to be achievable. We are also looking
into camera equipment to make sure we can film at as
highest quality as possible. Another issue that was raised
was how we can make the costumes and props look
realistic and professional to resolve this we have split up
all of the tasks so that each group member can focus on a
specific part of the production. We haven’t had any
suggestions that are different to our own ideas therefore
we are going to continue to develop our initial ideas.