1. Assignment 27: Timeline Final
Draft
Patrycia Butrym
Esere Simei-Akajagbo
Shivonne Weekes
Courtney Buabeng

2. 1. Kayla looking at girl
-Mid shot
-POV
2. Then shows Holly walking away
-Long shot
-POV
Then shows Holly running up the stairs
-Tilt from feet to head
-Low angle
-Shows that she’s distressed
-POV
4. Shows Holly’s hands tied up, tied feet, taped mouth
-Extreme close up
-Eyes wide open shows she’s terrified
5. Shows Holly tied up in the chair
-Mid shots of her back, front and side
Story In 21 Bullet Points

3. Story In 21 Bullet Points
Continued
6. Shows Holly tied up in chair
-Long shot from the front
7. Kayla picking up camera and opening it
-Close up shot
-Over the shoulder
-Introduces POV
8. Kayla looks at Holly and walks around her in a circle
-POV- 360
(Creates a sense of isolation/ sympathy.)
9. Kayla strokes Holly’s hair
- POV
- Close up shot
(Shows that she’s obsessed.)
10. Kayla shows the knives that are laid out
-Slow pan
-POV

4. Story In 21 Bullet Points
Continued
11. Kayla puts the camera down
-POV
- Shows knives
- Shows Holly’s chest breathing at a medium speed
12. Kayla picks up a knife
- Audience can hear silence
- Shows Holly’s chest breathing heavily
- Puts down knife dripping in blood
13. Kayla selects another knife
- Hear Holly screaming
- Foley- Flesh cutting
- Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt
- Kayla puts back knife dripping in blood
14. Kayla selects another knife
-Hear Holly still panting and screaming
-Foley- Flesh cutting
-Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt
-Kayla puts down knife dripping in blood, with tiny chunks of flesh and blonde hair

5. Story In 21 Bullet Points
Continued
15. Kayla selects another knife
-Holly’s breathing slows down
-Foley- knife rubbed together
-Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt
-Holly’s stops moving
16. Kayla picks up knives
-POV
-Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV
17. Kayla looks back at the girl and walks away
-POV
-Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV
18. Kayla walks out of the house-(shouldn’t be room?)
-POV
-Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV

6. Story In 21 Bullet Points
Continued
19. Kayla puts knives in the sink
-POV
-Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV
20. Kayla removes her overalls
-POV
-Heartbeat/Drums volume control increases
-Climax is built
21. Kayla in the mirror with flesh wig
-Freeze frame- screaming
-Close up shot

7. Timeline
T
Linear, Chronological Time
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
Titles/Credits (On black)
Camera Shots & Effects
Mid Shot
Then POV -
Kayla continuously
watching Holly
0secs
Long Shot- Holly walking
outside of train
POV- Kayla’s POV of Holly
looking back at her
Tilt – From Holly’s feet to head
Low Angle- Of Holly frantically
running up the stairs
POV- Kayla’s POV of Holly
looking back at her
25secs
Director and
Casts
Distribution
Company
Close Up Shots- Holly’s hands,
feet tied and her mouth taped
Extreme Close Up-Holly’s
eyes terrified and wide open
Production
Company
10secs
5secs
30secs
15secs
35secs
Mid Shots- Holly’s hands
tied up shown from the
back, front and sides
Long Shot- Holly tied up
Over The Shoulder-Kayla picking
up the camera
Close Up Shot then POV-
Shows Kayla’s hands opening side
of camera
POV (360 turning)-
Kayla watches Holly
and walks around her
in a circle
POV then Close Up
Shot- Kayla
strokes Holly’s hair
40secs
POV- Kayla shows the
knives laid out on a table
Slow Pan-Kayla pans the
different knives laid out
45secs

8. Timeline
Titles/Credits (On black)
Camera Shots & Effects
Linear, Chronological Time
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
T
80Secs
Production
Designers
Music
BY
95secs
55secs
100secs
65secs
50secs
POV-Kayla puts camera
down on table facing Holly’s
chest pumping at a medium
speed
Close Up Shot- Showing the
knives at the same time
Close Up Shot- Kayla’s hand picks
up a knife
Mid Shot- Holly’s breathing
quickens with fear and
she starts panting
Close Up Shot- Kayla puts knife
down dripping in blood
Close up shot- Kayla selects
another knife
Mid Shot-Shows blood pouring
down on Holly’s white t-
shirt
Close Up Shot- Kayla puts knife
back dripping in blood
70secs
90Secs
Close Up Shot- Kayla selects
another knife
Mid Shot- Shows Holly’s
breathing slowing
down and blood
pouring down on
Holly’s white t-shirt
Mid Shot- Holly’s stops
moving
POV- Kayla picks up
all the knives laid out
Close Up Shot- Kayla selects
another knife
Mid Shot- Holly still panting,
screaming and shuffling and
shows blood pouring down on
Holly’s white t-shirt
Close Up Shot- Kayla puts down
knife dripping in blood, with tiny
chunks of flesh and blonde hair
POV- Kayla looks
back at Holly and
walks away
POV- Kayla walks
out of room
115Secs
2mins
125secs
POV- Kayla puts
knives in the sink
POV- Kayla
removing her
overall
Close up shot-
Kayla n the mirror
stroking flesh wig
Props and
Costume
Edited

9. Changes From Timelines
Part 1
We were then able to explore:
• different special effects
•props
•camera shots
That would be appropriate for
each scene.
Detail for some important scenes
•We added shots, inspirations from real
films and instrumental beats after each
frame
•This helped us with our next stage
• Which was taking our developed ideas- to
create the final timeline
Developed ideas
We planned the timeline on paper
For each frame we roughly
calculated the duration e.g. 30
secs

10. Changes From Timeline
Part 2
This timeline has more detail
It explains the details within each
frame
Before After
This timeline has more detail
It explains the details within each
frame
It specifies how many flashbacks
we have.
Also explains the features of the
flashbacks

11. Pictures Of Group
Patrycia and Esere- Adding
the credits into the timeline
Patrycia and Esere were
drawing the timeline
Patrycia writing the script Courtney adding the
seconds to the timeline