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Assignment 11 draft 4 part 4
- 1. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Xheni
- 2. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Sayana
- 3. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Susan
- 4. Sanel and Kaya M Feedback we received from our target audience Marcin
- 5. Summary of what our target audience said M Overall most of them do enjoy watching thriller films as they like the thought of being scared. Also they find it interesting to see what the spirits will do next to the character in while film. Also none of our audience thought that our opening sequence was complicated and they liked our theme concept. However some said that would like us to film in the dark.
- 6. Kaya Characters N How have you developed your characters since draft 1? • We developed our character to be less dark and a lot more relatable to a wider range of our target audience • We made the character one age rather than a variety so its less confusing • The clown and doll have been developed into a spiritual characters who rather than look like the dolls to 2 girls with a doll and clown toys.
- 7. Kaya Characters N Actor 1: Character 1: Sanel Homer Laura Hibbitt Age: Age: 17 19
- 8. Slide not improved Kaya Characters N Inspirational pictures Tired eyes Clothes that don’t stand out
- 9. Kaya Characters N Costume and props Mascara Blush Tired eyes Pale skin Coloured top Messy hair Blue jeans Brown cardigan
- 10. Slide not improved Kaya Characters N Mise –en-scene Name – Laura Hibbit Gender – Female Age – 19 Costume – Brown cardigan, jeans, top Props – None Make-up – Mascara, tired eyes, blush Stereotype – Normal smart girl, average Facial expression – Scared, shock Body language – Gentle, awkward Representation – Typical teenage youth. A smart girl who’s abit popular around her area
- 11. Kaya Characters N Actor 2: Character 2: Gia Alveranga Cilia Elizabeth Carter Age: Age: 17 104
- 12. Kaya Characters N Inspirational pictures Plain white dress little Pale white face with girls used to wear black circles around eyes
- 13. Kaya Characters N Costume and props £3.19 £1.99 - White
- 14. Kaya Characters N Mise –en-scene Name – Cilia Elizabeth Carter Gender – Female Age – 104 Costume – White dress Props – None Make-up – Pale black eyes Stereotype – Little girl Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face Representation – A dead little girl from the 1800’s
- 15. Kaya Characters N Actor 3: Character 3: Mary Elizabeth Carter Rahel Fasil Age: Age: 16 105
- 16. Kaya Characters N Inspirational pictures Plain white dress little Pale white face with girls used to wear black circles around eyes
- 17. Kaya Characters N Costume and props £3.19 £1.99 - White
- 18. Kaya Characters N Mise –en-scene Name – Mary Elizabeth Carter Gender – Female Age – 105 Costume – White dress Props – None Make-up – Pale black eyes Stereotype – Little girl Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face Representation – A dead little girl from the 1800’s
- 19. Kaya Location O
- 20. Kaya O What is this location? This is where the whole opening sequence will be filmed Is it always accessible? This location is always accessible as its one of the group members home and will always be open for filming Health and safely. • Getting to bus to the house • Road safety when crossing roads • Walking to the house • Getting run over • Bus crash