1. Kaya
Enigma - How did they do it? L
Insidious opening sequence
Mysterious observer
They show a point of view of someone
walking around the house at night with
a shadowed hint on the window
Mysterious/scary reflection
They show a refection of the female
making the audience want to know
who she is and why she is there at
night watching over people
Credits and shots
During the credits they show shots of things for
example the inside of the house making the
audience watch more in why these are significant
and the titles because they portray ghost like
things making the audience want to see more
about ghosts

2. Kaya
Enigma L
How are we creating enigma in our opening sequences…
• By not telling the audience why these girls are haunting this room so their
audience will want to find out more
• The audience will want to watch more to see what relevance the dolls
have to this closet/house and why they’re always coming back
• At the ending of the opening sequence we build a climax to a sudden
shock/scare getting the audience excited to watch more
• Finally to see what happens to Laura in the closet and further of how the
ghosts disturb her

3. Kaya
Enigma L
How have we improved from draft 1?...
• Since draft one we have improved greatly on how we can create enigma.
• We have gone through many ideas and various genres to create a very
creative and versatile mind to what excited and interests our target audince
• By creating a questionnaire for our target audience to see what they find
interesting and what they don’t
• Researching type of films and themes or concept grabs the audiences
attention to watch more
• Watching many different genre of films opening sequences to understand
what makes enigma and realising what does not

4. Sanel
Target Audience M
Age – 15 – 17
Gender – Female and Male
Ethnicity – British
Location – United Kingdom
Interests/Hobbies – local groups, precious memories
Lifestyle – Social, attends college/school, quite open minded
Why would our target audience be interested in our idea/plot?
• Its based on real life, in London, so it will be familiar with the audience
• Our target audience will be interested to learn about how spirits can play with our mind
throughout the film and interested of being scared.
• The film is based in modern time and youth culture, use of slang in a closed narrative so they
can connect and relate to what they see in the film and leave thinking about the
consequences

5. Sanel
Target Audience M
Why would our target audience be interested in our film because of its form?
• The use of editing in building up tension will interest the target audience, they may find
interesting when something is about to occur.
• The use of suspension type music will keep the audience at the edge of their seat
imagining themselves in certain situations
Why would your target audience be interested in your film because of genre/conventions?
• The target audience would be interested in how different spirits can act and play with
your mind so hopefully it would be interest them.
• The thrill of watching it would constantly keep the target audience interested at the edge
of their seats
• The target audience could hopefully relate to the character while being interested
imaging themselves in them kind of situations

6. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Zoe

7. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Sinead

8. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Xheni

9. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Sayana

10. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Susan

11. Sanel and Kaya
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Marcin

12. Summary of what our target audience said M
Overall most of them do enjoy watching thriller
films as they like the thought of being scared.
Also they find it interesting to see what the
spirits will do next to the character in while film.
Also none of our audience thought that our
opening sequence was complicated and they
liked our theme concept. However some said
that would like us to film in the dark.

13. Kaya
Characters N
How have you developed your characters since draft 1?
• We developed our character to be less dark and a lot more relatable to a wider range of
our target audience
• We made the character one age rather than a variety so its less confusing
• The clown and doll have been developed into a spiritual characters who rather than look
like the dolls to 2 girls with a doll and clown toys.

14. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 1: Character 1:
Kaya Sumbland Laura Hibbitt
Age: Age:
17 19

15. Kaya
Characters N
Costume and props
Black eyes
makeup Short skirt
Matches
Candles Paper
White top Black cardigan

16. Kaya
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Laura Hibbit
Gender – Female
Age – 19
Costume – short skirt, white top, black cardigan
Props – book, candles, matches
Make-up – Mascara, tired eyes, blush, eyeliner
Stereotype – Vunerable, down to earth girl
Facial expression – Scared, shock
Body language – open
Representation – Quite likeable, and relatable to the audience. Quiet
and vunerable

17. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 2: Character 2:
Sanel Homer Cilia Elizabeth Carter
Age: Age:
17 73