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TV Crime Drama – Assessment Feedback

This lesson I aim to improve…
  1. My idea by…

  2. My storyboard skill…




  An example of a good response
TV Crime Drama – Assessment Feedback

       Why was this a good response?

C Grade                                             A Grade
• Title relates to characters and   • Explicit use of binary opposite
mood                                •Locations relevant
• Clear genre / sub-genre           • Detail mise-en-scene (costume)
• Terminology used throughout       • Consideration of audience
connotation                         • Reference to Bulmer & Katz
• Clear TV Crime character types    •Referenceto Todorov
• Realistic scheduling              • Reference to Propp character
• Setting clear urban                   types
• Idea is ‘watchable’
Storyboarding Feedback
C Grade                                             A Grade
• Every shot complete              • Sense of progression
• Annotations correct (LS/MS/CU)   • Sense of genre
• Sound considered                 • Clever integration of text
• Title sequence conventions       • Camera movement
     used                          • Enigma created
                                   • Thoughtful action
Today

Work on your IDEA
     TASK 2
Work on your storyboard
        TASK 4
Storyboarding
     Stimulus
Storyboard: Feedback
What was good…             TV Crime Genre
1.                         Audience Appeal
                           Character
2.                         Setting

Even better if…


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Assessment feedback

  • 1. TV Crime Drama – Assessment Feedback This lesson I aim to improve… 1. My idea by… 2. My storyboard skill… An example of a good response
  • 2. TV Crime Drama – Assessment Feedback Why was this a good response? C Grade A Grade • Title relates to characters and • Explicit use of binary opposite mood •Locations relevant • Clear genre / sub-genre • Detail mise-en-scene (costume) • Terminology used throughout • Consideration of audience connotation • Reference to Bulmer & Katz • Clear TV Crime character types •Referenceto Todorov • Realistic scheduling • Reference to Propp character • Setting clear urban types • Idea is ‘watchable’
  • 3. Storyboarding Feedback C Grade A Grade • Every shot complete • Sense of progression • Annotations correct (LS/MS/CU) • Sense of genre • Sound considered • Clever integration of text • Title sequence conventions • Camera movement used • Enigma created • Thoughtful action
  • 4. Today Work on your IDEA TASK 2 Work on your storyboard TASK 4
  • 5. Storyboarding Stimulus
  • 6. Storyboard: Feedback What was good… TV Crime Genre 1. Audience Appeal Character 2. Setting Even better if… - Video Essay of the Wire title Sequence