Slide title – added apostrophe “s” after Kodak
Bulleted items – applied initial caps to main words (consistency)
Added copyright notification at bottom left
Applied initial caps to main words in each bulleted item
I tried applying sub-bullets to “Mixture Analysis” etc., but it looked better this way
Last bullet – inserted the hyphen
Initial caps
Although the tint of the yellow bullets differs from that on previous slides, I wasn’t able to access the bullet to adjust the color. Don’t be concerned.
For this and the next several slides, I changed the font of the titles from Times to Arial and increased font size for consistency
I noticed that for this and several other slides onward, everything below the yellow line is grouped, and I’m unable to ungroup them in order to perform edits on the text; if I find a problem, I’ll call it to your attention and ask that you make the change yourself if possible
Do you have permission to use this figure?
I was unable to add the copyright notification on this slide, although it does appear when I view its slide master; somehow a black background seems to have been added to the entire slide and it obliterates the copyright notification (maybe the black is on “top” of the slide master?), whereas the Kodak logo and yellow lines at the top are okay. I tried to add the notification to the slide itself but was unable to do so and didn’t want to “monkey” with it too much. Don’t know what you did to this and some future slides, but if it was necessary for some reason, it’s okay
Also, if you can put an initial cap on the first letter of the three items that follow “D is related to” that would be fine
If possible, please put an initial cap on “components” near top of slide
If possible, please insert a hyphen between “Diffusion” and “dependent” and if you can change that line from Times to Arial (Body), please do
Do you have permission to use this graphic, or is the article one of yours? I’m unable to find it online to verify
I’ve noticed that most of the text on this slide (labels) is in Times rather than Arial, but that is not a big issue; if I’d had access to the slide (and some that follow) I probably would have changed it, but it is not worth the time for you to do it at this point, unless you wanted to
Changed format of reference for greater consistency with the other references that appear on the presentation
Permission? I don’t think this is one of your articles
Inserted hyphen in “diffusion-ordered”
Reference – changed font to Arial – is this one of your articles?
Nudged the “GRAM” and “A = C(Beta)P” up so they wouldn’t obliterate “A = CP”
I see that this is one of your articles
Do this and the following two images belong to Kodak?
Slide title – changed from Times 24 to Arial Heading 30 and lined up consistently with other slide titles
I’m not sure why you have “Eastman Kodak Company” on the top right of this slide (and two following slides) but I didn’t delete it
Text at bottom – changed from Arial to times
Slide title – changed from Times 24 to Arial Heading 30 and lined up consistently with other slide titles
I’m not sure why you have “Eastman Kodak Company” on the top right of this slide (and two following slides) but I didn’t delete it
Text at bottom – changed from Arial to times
I see that this is one of your articles and I gather than the slides that follow are from that article
Moved title up a bit to be on same plane as other slide titles.
Same changes as previous slide.
I see this is one of your articles so I gather that the slides that follow are from it?
Title – put an initial cap on “Surface”
I see that this is one of your articles – following slides are from it?
Nudged the graphic down a bit
Increased line spacing between the names from 0 to 4 points
