The Script and Details

1. Filming Session and
Shot
Scenes: Details:
Starts off with different
shots fading into each
other of Riven doing
funny things:
Riven is looking in the
mirror the camera pans to
her jumping and down to
pull her jeans on then
goes off to the side and a
crash sound is made to
give the effect that she
has fallen (wide shot)
Riven sitting in bed
watching TV (wide shot)
Riven laughing and
snorting (mid shot)
Riven putting her
retainers in (medium
close up)
Riven dancing (cutaway
shot)
Over the shoulder shot of
Riven looking in the mirror
brushing her hair (close
up)
 Retainers
 A brush
 The TV
 Her phone
 Speakers for the
music
Location is in Riven’s
bedroom. This is
somewhere that will have
high key lighting and she
will be wearing her
pajamas for some of the
scenes. Music will be
playing the background –
Olly Murs and Justin
Bieber and some
Shakera. She will be
singing into a brush.
Then 6 different shots
fading into each other
of Gray doing funny
things:
Voiceover ‘And Gray
Johnson’
Gray on zip wire
Gray walking down the
street (wide shot)
Gray on the phone (mid
shot)
Gray on swing
Gray pulling a funny face
for a picture (mid shot)
Gray and Hugh on swings
 His phone
 A polaroid
camera
We will be filming at
Stamford Park and
Denton Crown Point for
this. He will be dressed in
jeans and a jacket. The
weather will be cloudy
and he will swing happily.
Voiceover: “And all
they needed was the
fall in love with each
other” and scene of
Clancy and Riven
Riven staring at camera
Dropping umbrella
Clancy talks to Riven
“You’ve liked Gray since
you’ve come out the
womb, just ask him out”
Riven says, “he doesn’t
even know I exist”
“Is he like Mr Gray from
the books?”
“No he’s not into all that
weird stuff”
In Riven’s bedroom
talking on her bed, Riven
wearing a bathrobe and
Clancy wearing casual
everyday clothing.
Shot of girls in
bedroom –
Chewbacca scene
Clancy says ‘we’re going
to have to do something
about the way you look
we will have to start with
 Tweezers
Riven will be wearing a
bathrobe and her facial
expressions will be mainly

2. the brows you look like
chewbacca’ (mid shot)
Then into an extreme
close up of Riven’s badly
drawn eyebrows(-'Bad'
Eyebrows)
Riven says, ‘they add
character’ (medium close
up)
quite afraid for this
makeover. Bedroom will
be quite messy and there
will be a mirror where she
can see herself after the
makeover. Hair tied up.
Scene of Riven and
Gray together
Shot of Gray talking to
Hugh (two shot)
Riven walks down the
street with confidence in
slow motion and then she
falls (wide shot)
Gray runs to help her up
he bends down and gives
her his hand (two shot)
A mid shot of Riven and
Gray putting her hand out
Close up shot of the two
characters holding hands
Two shot of them staring
loving at each other
Gray says ‘are you ok?’
(mid shot)
Riven Stutters ‘yeah I do
that a lot’ (mid shot)
Gray says ‘do you maybe
wanna go out sometime?’
(over the shoulder shot)
They will both be dressed
for Autumn and Riven will
have an umbrella with
her.
We will be filming in
Denton Crown Point.
Voice Over: Where
two opposites meet
Costa Clink
Riven and Gray Looking
at Phone
Laughing together at park
Voice over: ‘Fall in love’
Riven laughing
Walking away together at
park
We will be filming in
Costa. Both characters
will be comfortable and
laid back. Brush man
eyebrows will be laughing
scene. Weather on this
day should be cloudy,
they are spending day
together.
Riven and Gray
further scenes
Riven playfully hits him
and says ‘I can’t believe
you just said that’
(laughing, two shot)
They kiss (two shot)
Slide showing: ‘From the
directors of Love Actually'
Riven dancing really
badly in front of her
friends (wide shot)
Laughing and both
characters chilled back
and in love. Riven
dressed a winter coat and
has a hat on. Gray will be
wearing a coat.
Slides – Pink font and
light-heartedness.
Rivens house when he
askes her whether she

3. Her and her friends
singing into their
hairbrushes (wide shot)
wants to go out for a date.
They walk into her front
door.
Other scenes Hugh and Gray talking in
the park
Gray in his front room
watching TV
Gray laughing
Gray pulling other faces