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1. Explain the complete organization of the content in the document.

The document describes in order how to install Sound Driver Hardware. First step is arrangement of the
clear condition to install Sound Driver Hardware. Second, third, forth step is the work to set up the Sound
Driver Hardware. Last step is letting the computer recognize by turning on the power.

2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

Yes, I do, because the document is divided into five sections, to represent the idea clearly. And each their
section is formed at easy and short words which general people can read easily.

3. What details are included in the document?
The document include the detail as general people can install the Sound Driver Hardware in detail
description.

4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
No there wasn't. It was easy for me to read the document.

5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
I say again. The document construction is very good. Especially, it is separated form.

6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
No there aren't.

7.What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
Daringly saying, The words in the document are specialized ward. So, the words had better change into
easy words.

8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how
this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
First difference is authored by using technical terms.
Second difference is correct English grammar.
Third difference is many amount of documents.

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  • 1. 1. Explain the complete organization of the content in the document. The document describes in order how to install Sound Driver Hardware. First step is arrangement of the clear condition to install Sound Driver Hardware. Second, third, forth step is the work to set up the Sound Driver Hardware. Last step is letting the computer recognize by turning on the power. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I do, because the document is divided into five sections, to represent the idea clearly. And each their section is formed at easy and short words which general people can read easily. 3. What details are included in the document? The document include the detail as general people can install the Sound Driver Hardware in detail description. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? No there wasn't. It was easy for me to read the document. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I say again. The document construction is very good. Especially, it is separated form. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No there aren't. 7.What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? Daringly saying, The words in the document are specialized ward. So, the words had better change into easy words. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). First difference is authored by using technical terms. Second difference is correct English grammar. Third difference is many amount of documents.