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๏‚™ A common feedback point that we received was that they love the idea
about the intertextuality of Wizard of Oz, and they loved the song choice.
๏‚™ We got told to look further into shot types and in order to do this we are
going to do test shots at the beach this weekend and this is also works on
the point we were given about weather in that it could be windy on the sea
front so we will see how the test shots turn out.
๏‚™ We have been told to consider instruments. We discussed this as a group
an have came to a conclusion that we will use instruments in the studio
location only. We decided that we will put glitter on top of the drums and
when the drummer hits it, the glitter will bounce, linking in with the theme
and genre.
๏‚™ We also got told to looking into planning the narrative further. As the
narrative will be filmed at the beach, we will look into it when going to do
test shots there and explore into what we could do further.

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  • 3. Reflection ๏‚™ A common feedback point that we received was that they love the idea about the intertextuality of Wizard of Oz, and they loved the song choice. ๏‚™ We got told to look further into shot types and in order to do this we are going to do test shots at the beach this weekend and this is also works on the point we were given about weather in that it could be windy on the sea front so we will see how the test shots turn out. ๏‚™ We have been told to consider instruments. We discussed this as a group an have came to a conclusion that we will use instruments in the studio location only. We decided that we will put glitter on top of the drums and when the drummer hits it, the glitter will bounce, linking in with the theme and genre. ๏‚™ We also got told to looking into planning the narrative further. As the narrative will be filmed at the beach, we will look into it when going to do test shots there and explore into what we could do further.