2. www: “The main headline
and magazine name a
really well designed and
the rest of the cover looks
well presented.”
EBI: “make the social
media links and the
added pictures for the
other stories bigger, they
are a little hard to see.”
www: “Great colour
scheme and wonderful
layout well done!”
EBI: “I think that the main
image would stand out
more against a lighter
background.”
Front cover feedback
www: “Professional
looking images and
structure.”
EBI: “More supporting
images for the other
smaller stories.”
3. www: “looks realistic and
professional.”
EBI: “I feel that the added
logos by the stories make
it a bit to cramped.”
Contents page feedback
www: “The headings for
each section of articles
look original and well
designed.”
EBI: “There are a few
blank spaces.”
www: “I the fact you have
stuck with the same
colour scheme as the
front cover.”
EBI: “There are to many
blank spaces.”
4. www: “I like the way the
text has ben formed
around the pictures,
makes it look more
professional.”
EBI: “A few patches of
empty space need filling.”
www: “Vibrant well taken
pictures that stand out
from the text.”
EBI: “Could make the
editor and photographer
name more pronounced.”
Double page feedback
www: “The design and
position of the headline is
very effective.”
EBI: “Add a hash tag for
the new album more
convectional.”
