The document provides feedback on a double page spread design. The feedback suggested loosening some boxes, making others less obvious, and adding more text. The designer then bulked out an interview, rearranged pages, and added a red line down the middle to separate the two pages like a magazine fold.

1. Feedback on my double page
spread

2. • I had made changes to my double page spread when
I got feedback from others about my first design it
included things like lose some of the boxes or make
the less obvious and add more text to the page so I
bulked out the interview and rearranged the other
page and put a red line down the middle separating
the two pages like a magazine would have a folding
where the red line would be.