EPANDING THE CONTENT OF AN OUTLINE using notes.pptx
Script draft 1
1. LAST THRID OF THE TRAILER.
INT. MOB OFFICE. NIGHT
There are a number of bags of cocaine on the table with one
bag already open. RONNIE, with his face in his palms as he
sits in a large chair in his office. Two mobsters walk into
the room.
MOBSTER 1
Boss, the drug deal was a bust again.
MOBSTER 2
We lost JOEY and CONOR as well boss.
RONNIE stands up, faces the away from the mobsters and punches
the wall.
RONNIE
How can this happen again!
EXT. CAR PARK. DAY
RONNIE and HARRY sprint towards each other from a distance
INT. POLICE STATION. NIGHT
DETECTIVE RICHARD WILSON is found starring at a board with
information regarding the case. In frustration, he swipes all
of his things off of his desk onto the floor.
2. RICHARD WILSON
(yelling)
This is going nowhere.
EXT. CAR PARK. DAY
RONNIE and HARRY are now in a fist fight with each other.
RONNIE knocks HARY to the floor and in one punch knocks him
out.
INT. RONNIES HOUSE. NIGHT
HARRY is found bruised and bound to a wooden chair. A gun is
held to his head.
RONNIE
(voiceover)
The worst thing about betrayal is that it never
comes from your enemies.
Fade to black
Title cards.