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Prewriting: Mind-mapping 
causes of students mature at a younger age 
expectation of parents 
towards their children 
expecting or 
imposing,too 
much and too 
soon 
affect a child's 
psychological, 
emotional and 
social 
development 
causes 
unnnecessary 
distress, stress 
and pressure 
too much things to learn, 
lack of sleep, cannot play 
and enjoy 
family 
breakdown 
trauma of 
watching 
parents spilt up, 
absentee father 
or mother 
prolonged stress 
have to 
overcome the 
stress 
forced to become 
mature; example: 
learn to take care 
of themselves 
environment 
al factor 
influenced by 
media and 
technology 
example of 
media: 
television, 
internet and 
radio 
imitate the 
behaviour 
or act of 
adult in the 
media
Causes of Students Mature at a Younger Age 
Nowadays, children putting on makeup and dressing in adult fashions are not an unusual or 
surprising thing at all. Children becoming more and more mature and they are said to be 
growing up too fast. Child development Ruth Liew asks, “Why do they have to look like little 
mini adults?” What causes them to become so mature at this young age? They become mature 
at a younger age due to environmental factor, expectation of parents towards their children 
and family breakdown. 
One of the causes students mature at a younger age is environmental factor. At this 
modern era, students are surrounded by high technology and different types of media. They 
will influenced by these technology and media as they tend to learn from what they see. 
Everyday, they will be in touch with media such as internet, television and radio. They use their 
modern gadget such as smartphone to surf the internet and watch video. Some pictures and 
videos in the internet are not suitable for them. The pictures and videos may contain things 
that are too mature for children to see or watch. They may imitate the behavior of adults in the 
pictures and videos. As the result, they become more and more mature like a little mini adult. 
Besides that, expectation of parents towards their children is an important cause of 
students mature at a younger age. Parents at this decade tend to rush their children to learn 
more things as if they are caught up in a rat race. They want their children to be more 
competitive when their children are working in the future compare to other children. They 
want their children to know so much such as the skill to navigate the internet and be a 
computer expert at a young age. They expecting or imposing, too much and too soon that they 
do not know they have affected a child’s psychological, emotional and social development. 
Their behavior causes unnecessary distress, stress and pressure to their children. For example, 
students will lack of sleep because they are forced to learn too many things such as music and 
art. They even do not have the time to play and enjoy. Students are not physically, socially and 
psychologically ready to handle it and they will not have a happy childhood. They will become 
more mature than other students that have happy childhoods. 
Last but not least, family breakdown will also cause students to mature at a younger age. A 
husband and a wife divorce is a very common issue in our society now. However, it is not a very 
good thing for a child in that family. Students in such family have to face the trauma of 
watching their parents spilt up and overcome the absence of their father or mother in their life. 
Students have to face prolonged stress and overcome it. They will be more mature if they can 
go through it but some will end up to involve in unhealthy activities such as vandalism. They will 
learn more than other students such as learn to think maturely and take care of themselves as 
their father or mother is absent. It is clear that some students from a broken family will act 
more mature than other students.
To conclude, environmental factor, expectation of parents towards their children and 
family breakdown cause students to become mature at a younger age. However, is children 
growing up so fast is good for the society? In my opinion, students or children should not 
become so mature at a young age. They should enjoy their school life and have a happy 
childhood. Students should have an innocent fun and some happy experiences.
References 
 Rozario. B. (2013). Are your children growing up too fast? Retrieved 23 September 
2014, from http://www.thestar.com.my/Lifestyle/Family/Features/2013/07/08/Are-your- 
children-growing-up-too-fast/

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ESSAY WRITING

  • 1. Prewriting: Mind-mapping causes of students mature at a younger age expectation of parents towards their children expecting or imposing,too much and too soon affect a child's psychological, emotional and social development causes unnnecessary distress, stress and pressure too much things to learn, lack of sleep, cannot play and enjoy family breakdown trauma of watching parents spilt up, absentee father or mother prolonged stress have to overcome the stress forced to become mature; example: learn to take care of themselves environment al factor influenced by media and technology example of media: television, internet and radio imitate the behaviour or act of adult in the media
  • 2. Causes of Students Mature at a Younger Age Nowadays, children putting on makeup and dressing in adult fashions are not an unusual or surprising thing at all. Children becoming more and more mature and they are said to be growing up too fast. Child development Ruth Liew asks, “Why do they have to look like little mini adults?” What causes them to become so mature at this young age? They become mature at a younger age due to environmental factor, expectation of parents towards their children and family breakdown. One of the causes students mature at a younger age is environmental factor. At this modern era, students are surrounded by high technology and different types of media. They will influenced by these technology and media as they tend to learn from what they see. Everyday, they will be in touch with media such as internet, television and radio. They use their modern gadget such as smartphone to surf the internet and watch video. Some pictures and videos in the internet are not suitable for them. The pictures and videos may contain things that are too mature for children to see or watch. They may imitate the behavior of adults in the pictures and videos. As the result, they become more and more mature like a little mini adult. Besides that, expectation of parents towards their children is an important cause of students mature at a younger age. Parents at this decade tend to rush their children to learn more things as if they are caught up in a rat race. They want their children to be more competitive when their children are working in the future compare to other children. They want their children to know so much such as the skill to navigate the internet and be a computer expert at a young age. They expecting or imposing, too much and too soon that they do not know they have affected a child’s psychological, emotional and social development. Their behavior causes unnecessary distress, stress and pressure to their children. For example, students will lack of sleep because they are forced to learn too many things such as music and art. They even do not have the time to play and enjoy. Students are not physically, socially and psychologically ready to handle it and they will not have a happy childhood. They will become more mature than other students that have happy childhoods. Last but not least, family breakdown will also cause students to mature at a younger age. A husband and a wife divorce is a very common issue in our society now. However, it is not a very good thing for a child in that family. Students in such family have to face the trauma of watching their parents spilt up and overcome the absence of their father or mother in their life. Students have to face prolonged stress and overcome it. They will be more mature if they can go through it but some will end up to involve in unhealthy activities such as vandalism. They will learn more than other students such as learn to think maturely and take care of themselves as their father or mother is absent. It is clear that some students from a broken family will act more mature than other students.
  • 3. To conclude, environmental factor, expectation of parents towards their children and family breakdown cause students to become mature at a younger age. However, is children growing up so fast is good for the society? In my opinion, students or children should not become so mature at a young age. They should enjoy their school life and have a happy childhood. Students should have an innocent fun and some happy experiences.
  • 4. References  Rozario. B. (2013). Are your children growing up too fast? Retrieved 23 September 2014, from http://www.thestar.com.my/Lifestyle/Family/Features/2013/07/08/Are-your- children-growing-up-too-fast/