The document provides guidelines on punctuating dialogue, emphasizing the use of quotation marks, proper placement of commas and periods, and formatting changes when speakers shift. It includes rules for dialogue with multiple speakers, quotes within quotes, and the correct usage of punctuation with exclamations and questions. Overall, these rules aim to enhance clarity and accuracy in writing dialogue.

1. Punctuating Dialogue
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2. Quotation Marks
“Jamie, I want you to take that new
car back to the dealership,” Elaina
snarled, “right now!”
“No way will you get me to,” Jamie
paused, “ return that car.”
Only the words spoken are surrounded by quotation marks.
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3. Keep commas and periods inside
the quotation marks
“ I do not know,” smirked Al.
Al smirked, “I do not know.”
Which one is correct?
The new teacher bellowed, “Everyone
needs to line up at the exit sign”.
The new teacher bellowed, “Everyone
needs to line up at the exit sign.”
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4. An uninterrupted speech needs
quotation marks only at the
beginning and the end.
“My father was right. I never should have
let you talk to me into this. I am terrified of
heights.”
“Oh cry me a river.” ” I‟m the one who
came out on the losing end of this
vacation!” “Why didn‟t you listen to your
father?”
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5. Start a new paragraph each time
the speaker changes.
“You can be so inconsiderate some
times!” Maryanne wailed.
“Oh I suppose you‟ll go whining to
your best friend now,” Fronia sighed.
“At least she understands me,”
sobbed Maryanne.
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6. When only two people are talking
you do not have to keep using their
names.
“I understand how you feel, okay?”
“You do?”
“Aw, you know I do.”
“And do you care about me?”
“Of course I do.”
“So you‟ll take the car back?”
“Over my dead body!”
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7. Quote inside of a quote
Use single quotation marks for quotes
within quotes.
This also includes publications that are set
off by quotes.
Example: He said, "Dana said, 'Do not treat
me that way.'"
Example: "Everyone will read the short
story entitled „The Free Thinker' for
tomorrow," said the substitute teacher.
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8. Exclamations and Questions
An exclamation point or question mark is
placed inside the quotation marks when it
punctuates the quotation. It is placed
outside when it punctuates the main
sentence.
For example:
I almost fell over when he asked, “That‟s not
too much for you, is it?”
Did the teacher really say, “Finish by
tomorrow”?
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9. Exclamations and Questions
When using exclamations and questions in
your dialogue be sure to properly
punctuate the words following the marks. If
the sentence continues and the following
words are not proper nouns then you DO
NOT capitalize the next word.
For example:
“Did you hear Mr. Marc?” asked Samuel.
“Watch out!” warned Johnna.
“No free time tonight!” Mrs. Tomao asserted.
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10. Punctuation
Before the final quotation mark, you
must include some type of
punctuation. If it‟s not the end of the
sentence, use a comma, ?, or !
Example: “No!” screamed the boy.
“Yes,” replied the teacher.
“What are we doing today?” asked the
student.
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