annotated monkey

1. Netherbody
By Jordon Jones

2. Scene 1.
Location – Exterior, 10:30 PM.
00:00 - 01:30 (Introduction & Beginning)
1. Non-diegetic sound. The sounds of nature play.
Birds chirping, leaves being blown around by the
wind etc. Very calm and quiet.
2. Non-diegetic sound. Loud music starts to fade in,
along with the sound of a car approaching the
scene. Car door opens and shuts.
3. 0050 - Aaron: So I felt the bite on the end of my
rod, pulled it up and it was literally a 100oz
carp!
4. 0089 - Ryan: Okay, sure… my dads caught way bigger
anyway…
5. 0060 - Jay: Nobody cares about your stupid carp!
The only fish you should be worrying about is the
one in this river.
6. 0090 - Ryan: If you’re right about this; I don’t
think Aaron’s 100oz carp is anything to worry
about.
7. 0051 - Aaron: Yeah, I wouldn’t really call this a
‘fish’, but there’s no way it’s real anyway, so who
cares. Let’s get this out of the way so we can go
back to my place and watch the game.

3. Scene 2.
Location – Exterior, 10:32 PM.
01:30 – 03:30 (Middle)
1. 0061 - Jay: Okay, I don’t know how we’re supposed
to get it to come up but if I’m correct it should
be somewhere here. This is when all the other
attacks have happened.
2. 0091 - Ryan: Wait, so this is where those other
people got attacked? And we’re standing here? Are
you using us as live bait or something?
3. 0063 - Jay: Uhm, well… yes… but, how else are we
supposed to see the thing without us being here?
It’s not like we can wave around some Scooby Snacks
and get it to come to us.
4. 0092 - Ryan: Are you kidding me? There’s something
seriously wrong with you Jay. I’m leaving.
5. 0066 - Jay: Ryan, wait. We don’t even know if it’s
real yet, I mean I know it is but you want to find
out just as bad as me, right?
6. 0093 - Ryan: I did, but not now. I’m not gonna
stand here and be eaten alive by a giant fish. I’m
going home.
7. 0052 - Aaron (interrupts): Hey! Quiet for a second!
8. Non-diegetic sound: Silence except for a short,
pulsating ringing noise.
9. 0068 - Jay: Yeah, I hear it, what is that?
10.0094 - Ryan: I don’t care. I’m going home. Aaron
are you coming or not?
11.0054 - Aaron: Wait, I think I see something by the
riverbed…
12.0054 - Aaron: What is this stuff?

4. 13.0070 - Jay: You probably shouldn’t touch that
stuff… Weird… It looks like a bunch of- tadpoles? I
don’t know. They could be eggs. What if it’s
reproducing?
14.0095 - Ryan: Okay now you’re creeping me the hell
out.
15.0056 - Aaron (walks toward Ryan): Here, want some?
16.0096 - Ryan: Ew! Get that away from me!
17.0057 - Aaron: (Laughs)
18.0073 - Jay: Uh guys… I don’t mean to worry you, but
unless Aaron’s been bulking I don’t think his
shadow is that big…
19.0097 - Ryan: Aaron! Behind you!
20.Non-diegetic sound. The Neverbody rises and makes a
loud screech noise that knocks Aaron over the side
of the riverbed.
21.0099 - Ryan: I have you Aaron! Grab my hand!
22.0075 - Jay: Get in the car! Now!

5. Scene 3
Location – Exterior, next day, 11:00 AM.
03:30 – 05:00. (End)
1. 0080 - Policeman 1: Alright, this is where they
reported it.
2. 0100 - Policeman 2: Yeah, same place again too.
3. 0081 - Policeman 1: You’d think all the barbed wire
and the fencing would stop people from coming here.
4. 0101 - Policeman 2: Not to mention all the signs
littered everywhere. Goddamn kids… At least these
ones didn’t die…
5. 0083 - Policeman 1: Yeah, but now they can blabber
about it to their friends, if this gets out our jobs
are on the line.
6. 0102 - Policeman 2: Don’t worry, even if they do
nobody will believe them. As long as we deny it,
it’ll be us against them. And nobodies going to
believe a bunch of kids over us.
7. 0086 - Policeman 1: True. But this is getting out of
hand. We need to do something about it.
8. 0103 - Policeman 2: What do you suggest we do? Last
time we tried moving the damn thing we lost 6 of our
guys. You know how hard it was going on live
television and saying it was because of a diving
accident? I’m not doing that again.
9. 0088 - Policeman 1: There’s not much we can do. Just
put up a few signs saying the river is polluted and
not to go near it.
10.0104 - Policeman 2: Okay. Will do.
11.Diegetic sound. Car door slams shut. Outro music
begins to fade slowly…