4. On your own paper, clearly identify these parts
in the margin with brackets and numbers
1. Where you have defined the problem
2. Your thesis
3. Your clearly described solution: your plan for
implementation
4. Your convincing argument in support of the proposed
solution
5. Where you have Indicated and responded to Readers’
Objections and Questions
6. Where you have evaluated alternative solutions
7. Your conclusion
6. Responders
Carefully read the essay you are reviewing, noting
only obvious typos or other errors by underlining. You
do not need to comment. Do not ask the writer
questions. If you don’t understand the essay, tell the
writer in response to the revision guide or in the
margins.
Answer the revision guide questions on another
sheet of paper or on the back of the writer’s essay.
Refer to the parts of the essay the writer has
identified in order to respond appropriately.
Be thorough.
7. When you finish
Return the essay and your comments to the
writer.
While you wait for your essay to be returned,
answer the revision guide questions for
yourself.
When you receive your essay, look at the
feedback. Think about how you will revise your
essay.
Begin the revision process.
8.
9. Homework
Review your essay suggestions
Revise Essay #4 accordingly
Submit essay #4 electronically to my
kaizena profile at
https://kaizena.com/palmoreessaysubmis
siongmail on the final day of class.
M/W class before 5:30, Thursday, August 6th.
T/Th class before 5:30, Friday, August 7th.
