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1. I am a food and cooking lover and I had done several
cooking courses, so I feel I am very much in touch with
different types of food and ways to cooked them.
I am a food and cooking lover and I have done several
cooking courses so I feel I am very much in touch with
different types of food and ways to cook them.
I would like to express my interest in contribute to your
magazine.
I would like to express my interest in contributing to your
magazine.
I have been working for two years with minors in risk of
social exclusion as a volunteer and I have recibed a huge
formation
I have been working for two years with minors at risk of
social exclusion as a volunteer and I have received
thorough training
your excellent articles are implicated to maintain well-
updated to the readers.
your excellent articles are meant / strive to maintain the
readers well updated
Besides it is admirable the work you do as being the
platform of promising new writers.
Besides, the work you do as a platform for promising new
writers is admirable.

2. As a regular reader of Local View, I have to say that your
articles are extremely good due to they seem to be written
with force attracting readers.
As a regular reader of Local View, I have to say that your
articles are extremely good, due to the fact that they seem
to be written with great conviction, thus attracting
readers.
Having made my dissertation, I have been able to meet
and interact with people from the tourism sector who
move in a reduced and specialized enviroment.
During my dissertation / upon completing my dissertation,
I have been able to meet and interact with people from
the tourism sector.
Normally I don't watch those kinds of commercials in the
metro television but fortunately I watch this one. The job
opportunity you are offering is just perfect for me, because
I have study journalism and I have a master in Sport
Journalism.
I don't normally watch those kinds of commercials on the
metro television but fortunately I watched this one. The
job opportunity you are offering is just perfect for me,
because I have studied journalism and I have / hold a
master’s in Sport Journalism.
My experience was really enriching there, not only because
I learn how to write but what it is more important, I learn
to understand the media world and to collaborate with my
fellows.

3. My experience was really enriching there, not only because
I learnt how to write but what is more important, I learnt
to understand the media world and to collaborate with my
fellow journalists / peers / co-workers.
In this congress I have the opportunity to get in touch with
many sportsman from a widely variety of clubs and sports.
In this congress I had the opportunity to get in touch with
many sportsmen from a wide variety of clubs and sports.
My friends in "Close to the Sky" have just realized their
first album and it is expected to be one of the
revolutionary sounds in Spain this year.
My friends in "Close to the Sky" have just recorded /
released their first album and it is expected to be one of
the revolutionary sounds in Spain this year.
Thanks to these contacts, my knowledge about local artists
and their music is constantly actualized.
Thanks to these contacts, my knowledge about local artists
and their music is constantly updated
I am writing in response your advertisement which
appeared in October issue of Local View. I would like to
express my interest in becoming a contributor to your
magazine in sports section.
I am writing in response to your advertisement which
appeared in the October issue of Local View. I would like
to express my interest in becoming a contributor to your
magazine in the sports section.

4. For example, last week I went to the new hipster café
located in an old bus and to Michelin's star restaurant of
the Rinaldi Hotel and I found good and bad things in both
places that I would be happy to share with others whom
also are little gourmets.
For example, last week I went to both the new hip café
located in a converted bus and to the Michelin-starred
restaurant of the Rinaldi Hotel. I found good and bad
things in both places that I would be happy to share with
others who are also little gourmets.
I would be well qualified to collaborate with you writing
about local restaurants and I would also provide my
knowledge about cafés.
I would be well qualified to collaborate with you, and
would love to write about local restaurants and I would
also provide my knowledge about cafés.
I especially admire the way you count the news, not falling
in sensationalism.
I especially admire the way you tell the news without ever
falling into sensationalism.
I would also like mentioning that I recently finished a 3-
month scholarship in my local town magazine...
I would also like to mention that I recently completed a 3-
month internship in my local town magazine...