Practical Research 1: Lesson 8 Writing the Thesis Statement.pptx
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1. In Spanish are translated some biographies and selected
parts of her diaries and correspondence.
Some biographies and selected parts of her diaries and
correspondence have been translated into Spanish.
I especially admire your idea which everyone can wear
quality clothes with affordable prices and for all ages. I can
say I find your clothes, your magazines and your fashion
shows wonderfully elaborated.
I especially admire your idea that/whereby everyone can
wear affordable quality clothes suitable for all ages. I can
say I find your clothes, your magazines and your fashion
shows wonderfully conceived.
Since 2013 to 2014, I wrote so much articles for Grazia
Magazine.
From 2013 to 2014, I wrote many / numerous articles for
Grazia Magazine.
I want that this company will try expand horizons.
I want this company to try and/to expand its horizons.
Increasing the associates will let you increase the amount
of readers.
Increasing the associates will let you / enable you to raise
the number of readers.
Please find attached a sample article about the refugee's
crisis and my thesis that I mentioned before which I hope
you find it exemplifying.
2. Please find attached a sample article about the refugee
crisis and the thesis that I mentioned before, which I hope
you’ll find exemplifying.
Besides, I have been footballer 14 year in 5 different clubs
in Madrid, athlete in A.D. Marathon and even I have
played American Football for one year.
Besides, I have been a footballer for 14 years in 5 different
clubs in Madrid, an athlete in A.D. Marathon and I have
even played American Football for one year.
I acquired these skills working as a football referee, where
not only had I been able to deal with very aggressive
footballers, but also with coaches and spectators out of
their wits.
I acquired these skills working as a football referee, where
not only was I able to deal with very aggressive
footballers, but also with coaches and spectators out of
their wits.
I expect the music will be also diverse. I am used to dance
to different music styles...
I expect the music will also be / I expect the music to also
be diverse. I am used to dancing to different music
styles...
Your interesting articles are the perfect platform to spread
the culture among citizens.
Your interesting articles are the perfect platform to spread
culture among citizens.
3. I also worked for publishing company specialized in French
and Spanish literature where I could translate some new
novels which are now available in libraries.
I also worked for a publishing company specialized in
French and Spanish literature, where I was able to
translate some new novels which are now available in book
stores / shops.
I am a loyal reader of your magazine for many years.
I have been a loyal reader of your magazine for many
years.
I have been living here since I was born, that allows me to
write about Madrid with personal vision of a local person.
I have been living here since I was born, which allows me
to write about Madrid with the personal vision of a local
person.
It is almost in the heart of the center. It is one of the
favorite places for the pizza eaten lovers.
It is almost in the heart of the city / city-center. It is one
of the favorite places for pizza-eating lovers / pizza lovers.
The price of the pizza is not so expensive as we could
think at the first time.
The price of the pizza is not as expensive as one might
have expected.
4. I hope that my CV is interesting for the position that you
want to cover and I am at your disposal in case you want
to do an interview
I hope that my CV meets the position’s requirements. I
would love / appreciate the opportunity to meet in person
to further discuss my credentials with you.
I think my articles will be of interest to your readers as I
usually get very positive comments on Tripadvisor when
doing a restaurant critic.
I think my articles will be of interest to your readers as I
usually get very positive comments on Tripadvisor when I
write a restaurant review.