The feedback given for our Rough Cut.

1. ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK
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ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

2. ROUGH CUTROUGH CUT
When we screened our rough cut for the class, we received
some feedback from every group. They had to fill out a sheet
giving feedback on what they thought was good, what was bad,
and what we should improve upon regarding our poster,
magazine and trailer.

7. FEEDBACK SUMMARYFEEDBACK SUMMARY
Overall, most of the criticisms were down to the fact that we hadn’t got
very far in the editing process with all of our products. There were
comments on the sound not fitting the trailer, it not making sense (which
it wouldn’t do yet as we didn’t have the voiceover), but people were able to
relatively well establish the genre and narrative. As for the print work,
almost every piece of feedback included something like “add a billing
block” or “make it look more like a magazine” which is something that we
obviously would improve on when we worked more on it. This is quite
hopeful however as it means there is nothing glaringly wrong with our
work that can’t be rectified simply by actually continuing with our editing.
We know what we need to do to improve – and that is to finish our work.