2. THESIS
STATEMENT
In our opinion, we agree that parents
should be blamed on child abuse
cases, this happened because of
parent’s behavior, lack religious
teachings, and family problems.
3. TOPIC SENTENCES 1
One major reason of child abuse
might happen is based on parent’s
behavior treat their children during
substantially growth.
i) Punish child without any reason.
ii) Give stress towards their child.
4. TOPIC SENTENCES 2
Another reason we agree, if
parents lack religious teaching,
it can affect their child become
not manageable.
i) Teach child not based Islamic
values.
ii) Caught with social problem.
5. TOPIC SENTENCES 3
The last but not least child abuse
also can be occurring if problem
having in their own family
especially it come from their
parents.
i) Divorce.
ii) Financial problem.
6. REBUT
Some people disagree with that statement
because child abuse it depends on that
individual child to manage their life make
such other child. Then, parent’s beatings
and locking child in the basement it because
want to give a lesson for their children.
However, based on discussed arguments,
we strongly agree that parents should be
blamed for child abuse.
