powerful copy
 
 
7  deadly sins
1.  3…2…1…
 
2.  We… we… we…
 
3.  So what?
 
4.  What do you want me to do?
 
5.  confusing
6.  apathy
 
7.  trust
writing  powerful copy
goal audience SPIN AIDCA
goal
know, think, do
Cox & cox postcard
Isabella Oliver
who are you writing to?
audience
problems, needs motivations…
SPIN
 
Solutions people  can  feel  in their  gut
“ You can say the right thing  about a product or service. And  nobody will listen. You’ve got to  say it in such a way that people  will feel it in their gut. Because if  they don’t, nothing will happen.” William Bernbach,  Advertising Guru
 
The painful exercise!
 
writing…
aidca
a ttention i nterest d esire c onviction a ction
grab  attention
 
 
 
headlines
announcement
Introducing the UK’s only specialist documentation sector recruitment agency. Announcing our lowest price yet for… Announcing the most luxurious linen yet. Save 25% when you buy  before  1st August
command
Save £££s every week for the rest of  your  life! Here’s how… Invest just one hour of your time discovering how to make your business image work harder for you
state offer
500 full colour business cards for just £49! Save upto 77% on full colour print Commission free  mortgages throughout August!
personal
You’ve helped them before. Now they need  your  help again. You know more about printing than most - so you’ll recognise a great offer when you see one! You’ve been a valued customer of Laytons Solicitors for over five years…
peer to peer
As a fellow marketing professional myself I know the importance of working with the right partners… As a fellow HR executive you know how expensive hiring the wrong people proves to be. As a fellow HR executive I know the impact a slow recruitment campaign will have on your workload.
question
How will  you  make your business grow faster in 2008? Would you like recruiting staff to take up less of  your  time?
human interest
When I was 21, I was diagnosed with breast cancer… I never had time to think about a pension when I was young. Now, time is all I have… How often do  you  feel thirsty? Will you stop for a minute to think about it?
emotion
Start creating marketing that  really works … Communicate the professional image that your business deserves. Your family deserves to sleep safely, so wake up to a few facts about house fires
identify problem
Sick and tired of wasting time reviewing candidates your recruitment consultancy should never have sent you? Is your business image letting you down?
benefit
Your marketing could be working much, much harder for you. Here’s how… Would you like to add £160,000+ to your annual turnover? You could be. Here’s how… Get much  more  advertising out of  your  marketing budget.
irrefutable logic
The more people who know about your business - the  more business  you will get. Yellow Pages - let’s tell the world you’re here! “When advertising is a numbers game, it often adds up to nothing.” WebCast - just pay for what you get
let them in on something…
You’re one of the very first to know… Exclusive offer  for Account Customers only Special preview - for existing customers only Shhhh, it’s our little secret…
reasons why
Three reasons why  your  competitors choose Documentation People as their recruitment agency of choice Three ways that you can make an immediate difference to a child’s life… Three ways that you can take action and feel in control of your grief…
 
Manipulate  the emphasis
 
powerful  angles
 
interest…
generate  interest
what do they need to know?
pain triggers
why do they care?
desire…
create  desire
do I really want or need this?
 
impact of not having?
prove the benefits to me
conviction…
build  conviction
guarantee
“ a great guide to doing exhibitions - it does what it says on the tin!”  Margaret MacMillan testimonial
The power of testimonials
action…
call to  action
 
what’s the rush?
 
ask for the order
powerful  copy…
is focused on the customer
is painful
Starts by  thinking about  the action
support…
2 weeks email support
If you found this useful… Exhibit! How to use exhibitions to grow your business 18 th  March www.marvellousworkshops.co.uk
Fiona Humberstone runs printing.com in Guildford which helps companies win more business from their brand and marketing communications. Fiona is the author of the forthcoming  book: Exhibit Profitably and runs regular  workshops and events around the  South East. If you’d like to book Fiona  for a one to one consultation or to speak  at your company or group please email  [email_address] www.guildfordprinting.com

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Editor's Notes

  • #4 Stackhouse poland. Does this one cut it?
  • #7 Less than 3 seconds to grab the reader’s attention or it goes in the bin! Grab attention with an arresting, relevant headline ATTENTION
  • #9 Always written from the point of view of the company, not the recepient INTEREST
  • #11 Ends up not being relevant, or not compelling enough to motivate them to take action DESIRE
  • #13 Too many calls to action/ none at all ‘introducing company’ - no response! ACTION
  • #14 Stackhouse poland. Does this one cut it?
  • #15 Jargon, too many actions. Propositions, writing just doesn’t make sense!
  • #16 desire
  • #18 conviction
  • #38 Are you talking to me?
  • #75 Why are you talking to me, what do you want me to know?
  • #80 It’s a nice idea, but do I really want it or need it?
  • #84 What is it and what does it do? What makes you unique or better? How? How does this benefit the buyer? What is the impact of not having it? Can you quantify the value? Can you prove your claims? What if it doesn’t work, fit or satisfy? Why buy it now?
  • #86 How can I make sure I’m not making a mistake?
  • #91 What do you want people to do? Call? Email? Write? Visit your website?
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